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1、高中英语写作微技能训练第二章句子写作微技能训练(略)第三章段落写作微技能训练一篇好文章建构于良好的段落上,没有适当的段落,即使句子没有语法错误,也不算是一篇好文章。吴忠高级中学王志红第一节段落=主题句+发展句+结尾句由主题句加上数个支持论点和结尾句就构成一个段落,数个段落就构成一篇文章。这就是英语作文的基本框架。Ihaveanoldbikewhichmyfathergavemeformy12thbirthday.Ireceivedalotofpresentsthatday,butthebikewasmyfa
2、voriteone.Wehadcakeandicecreamattheparty.Thenwerodeourbiketothepark.Jimhadanaccidentonhisbikeandhadtoseeadoctor.Thenitstartedtorain.Irodemybikebackhomeanddidmyhomework.AfterdinnerItookmybikeoutagainandrodearoundtheneighborhood.Allmyfriendswantedtotrymynewb
3、ike.Itwasmyfavoritepresentthatday.WhatabusybirthdayIhad!B.Mybikeisold,butitisn’tuseless.ManyofmyfriendsandfamilymemberstellmathatIshouldbuyanewbike,,butmyoldonestillworkswell.Icanrideittothestores,tothepark,andtoschool.Itissooldthatnoonewillstealit.Someone
4、mightstealanewbike,butnotanoldone.Lastweekmymother’smotorcyclehadaproblem,sosheborrowedmybiketovisitherfriend.Sometimesabikeisevenmoreusefulthanamotorcycle!Weshouldnotthrowthingsawayjustbecausetheyareold.Weshouldusethingstilltheybecomeuseless.B练习2.猜猜看到底哪一段
5、写得好,A段还是B段?Why?Thebirdsweresingingearlyinthemorning.Theywokemeup,andIdressedmyselfinmynewclothes.Ihadboughttheminadepartmentstorejustthedaybefore.Theywereonsale,andthereweremorepeopleinthedepartmentstorethanIhadeverseenbefore.IwasluckytofindtheclothesIwant
6、edonsale.Afterbreakfast,Iwenttoschoolandshowedoffmynewclothes.Iheardthefirstbirdssinging,buttheydidn’twakemeup.Actually,.Icouldn’tgettosleepthatnight.Asthefirstlightenteredmybedroom,Isawthemlaidoutonmychair,justwaitingformetowear.ThedaybeforeIhadboughtthes
7、enewclothesonsaleatadepartmentstore.Ididn’tmindallthepeoplebecauseIfoundjusttheclothesIwanted.IfeltsoexcitedbecauseIcouldshowthemoffatschool.B练习3.分析下面的段落,找出其主题句、发展句和结尾句。总共有几个论点来支持主题句?主题句与结尾句以哪些相同的字来连贯Mybrother’sroomisthemessiestroomintheworld!Ifyouopenhisd
8、oor,youwillfirstnoticethatyoucannotwalkeasilyinsidehisroom.Oldmagazinesandcomicbooksarealloverthefloor.Idon’tthinkthatadogwouldsleepinhisbedbecauseofallthedirtyclothesonit.Hisdesklookslikeagarbagecan.Onlyapig