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1、【第一段】简要描述图片，略微引向主题；图片基调相关细节引向主题【第二段】点明图片寓意，进行充分拓展；TàD1àD2àC1.化立论为驳论大众观点质疑大众详实论据得出结论2.化苍白为哲理哲理引入主题阐释详实论据（举例）（正反）（因果）（利弊）重申结论199942GRE黄玉成83MayI…SorryPleaseNowayComeonShutup2400235016503.化平淡为修辞-14-Conceivedinthepictureisasimpletruththat……Arenotthefollowingca
2、sessufficienttoprovethispoint?Haven’tyoueverfound…?Haven’tyouevernoticed…?Why….?Why…?Why…?Aren’tthey….?【第三段】结合上文论调，进行针对评论。1.社会弊病（生态环境）给大众的建议或策略控制：外控；内控Correspondinglawsandregulations(schoolregulations)shouldbecarriedoutto….Officialinterventionshouldbeputo
3、nthematterof…to…Finesandpenaltiesshouldbeactivatedtodirectthesituationtoapositiveone.Newsocialnormshouldbeestablishedto…Mediasupervisionshouldbecastonthematterof…..self-disciplineself-controlself-restrictTheabilityofself-restrainshouldbecultivatedamongtho
4、sewho…..Rightattitudetoward…shouldbenurturedamongthosewho…Awarenessof…shouldbeadvocatedamongthosewho…从外控走向内控：【版本一】Howcanweputtheproblemofenvironmentaldestructionundercontrol?Itoccurstomanythatweareinneedofapackagedeal,involvinginterventionfromenvironmento
5、rganizations,legislationfromdepartmentconcerned,andsupervisionfromthemassmedia.Butisthatdealcomprehensiveenough?Actually,wealsoneedtheawarenessthattheplanetearthisouronlyhome,andwemaybehomelessifwemistreatit,withtheassistanceofwhichwecanfundamentallyputth
6、isproblemtoanend.【版本二】Suchmisconductsof…shouldbeputundercontrolimmediately!Buthow?Suggestionsfromthegeneralpublicmayinvolve…,…,or….Buttheseproposalshavebeenputintopracticeforyears,withfruitfulrewards.Isthatenough?Actually,whatweneedismorethanwhatmentioned
7、above,butanewwaythat…….《狗镇》Grace-14-1.社会风尚表明自己的态度和决心支持：理由：惠及自身与他人惠及当下与未来决心：Askedaboutmyattitudetoward…,Iamtosay…iseitherbeneficialtoindividualsorelevatingtosociety.Actually,thisescalatingeffectwillnotlastformerelyseveralyears.Asitisasocialwealth,wearewill
8、ingtodeliveritfromoneindividualtoanother,fromonedecadetoanother,andfromonegenerationtoanother.Asacollegeman,Iamdeterminedtobearolemodelinthisaspect.(Ascollegemen,wehavethedutytojointhecampaignof….)2.箴言哲理提出针对个人的建议求助：
