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1、【第一段】简要描述图片，略微引向主题；图片基调相关细节引向主题【第二段】点明图片寓意，进行充分拓展；TàDàDàC1.化立论为驳论大众观点质疑大众详实论据结论观点HuanYucheng1999GRE240023501950/428002.化苍白为哲理哲理引入主题阐释详实论据（举例）（利弊）（因果）（正反）观点结论3.化平淡为修辞Conceivedinthiscartoonisamottowhichnoonecanwaveaside,that……..However,casesagainstthisprincipleareabundantan
2、dwithineasyreach.Haven’tyouevernoticed…?Haven’tyoueverseen…?Why…?Why…?Why…?Arenot…?-14-【第三段】根据上文论调，进行有效评论。1.社会弊病（生态环境）控制：外控，内控；Correspondinglawsandregulations(schoolregulations)shouldbecarriedoutto….Officialinterventionshouldbeactivatedto….Finesandpenaltiesshouldbeputonth
3、ismatterof…todirectittoapositivesituation.FINEFORPARKINGNewsocialnormshouldbeestablishedto…Mediasupervisionshouldbecaston….to…..Rightattitudetothematterof…shouldbecultivatedamongthosewho….Awarenessof…shouldbenurturedamongthosewho….Theabilityofself-disciplineon…shouldbenur
4、turedamongthosewho….Self-disciplineSelf-restrictSelf-controlSelf-restrainHowcanweputtheproblemofdestructingournaturalenvironmentundercontrol?Itoccurstomanythatweneedapackagedeal,involvinginterventionfromdepartmentconcerningecologicalenvironment,legalmeansaboutthismatter,a
5、ndseverepenaltiesonthosewhocommitsuchmisconducts.Butisthatdealcomprehensiveenough?Actually,wealsoneedakeyprogram,plantingtheideaintoeverymindofusthatwemaybe“homeless”ifwemistreatouronlyhome–theplanetearth,withtheassistanceofwhichwecanfundamentallyputthisproblemtoanend.Suc
6、hmisconductsmustbeputundercontrolimmediately!Buthow?Suggestionsfromthegeneralpublicinvolves…,…,and….Suchproposalshavebeenputintopracticeforyears,withfruitfulreward.Isthatenough?Actually,whatweneedismorethanwhatmentionedabove,butanewwaythat…….-14-1.社会风尚支持：理由：惠及自身与他人；惠及当下与未
7、来；决心：Askedaboutmyattitudeto…,Iamtosay…iseitherbeneficialtoindividualsorelevatingtosociety.Actually,suchanescalatingeffectwillnotlastformerelyseveralyears.Asitisasocialwealth,wearewillingtodeliveritfromoneindividualtoanother,fromonedecadetoanother,andfromonegenerationtoano
8、ther.Asacollegestudent(Ascollegemen),Iamdeterminedto(wearesupposedto…)….2.箴言哲理（个人建议）求助：他人，长者，书籍，
