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5、从外控走向内控：Howcanweputthisproblemofenvironmentaldestructionundercontrol?Itoccurstomanythatwhatwedemandisapackagedeal,involvinginterventionfromenvironmentorganizations,legislationfromdepartmentconcerned,andsupervisionfromthemassmedia.Butisthatdealcomprehensiveenough?Actually,wealsoneedtheawareness
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