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1、智课网GRE备考资料新gre作文官方范文分析第三篇下面是小编为大家搜索整理的有关新gre官方范文分析第三篇,接下来几天小编将给大家分享新gre作文官方范文全解析,希望对备考新gre作文的同学有所帮助。第三篇文章ThefollowingistakenfromamemofromtheadvertisingdirectoroftheSilverScreenMovieProductionCompany.Accordingtoarecentreportfromourmarketingdepartment,fewerpeopleattendedmoviesproducedbySilverScr
2、eenduringthepastyearthaninanyotheryear.AndyetthepercentageofgenerallyfavorablecommentsbymoviereviewersaboutspecificSilverScreenmoviesactuallyincreasedduringthisperiod.Clearly,thecontentsofthesereviewsarenotreachingenoughofourprospectiveviewers;sotheproblemliesnotwiththequalityofourmoviesbutwit
3、hthepublic'slackofawarenessthatmoviesofgoodqualityareavailable.SilverScreenshouldthereforespendmoreofitsbudgetnextyearonreachingthepublicthroughadvertisingandlessonproducingnewmovies.原文逻辑顺序:看电影观众减少==〉评论人好评增加==〉观众不关注评论==〉我们要增加广告费投资并减少电影投资WSAMPLE-1(score6)Theargumentpresentedaboveisrelativelysou
4、nd,however,theauthorfailstorecognizealltheelementsnecessarytoevaluatehissituation.这句话也很摸版化,但是重点分析一下这里evaluatehissituation,读了后面几段,我们会知道全是在考虑对外界的评估的。所以这一句话就指明了论证的核心,可以说统领全文。Theideathatmoremoneybeinvestedinadvertisingmaybeahelpfulone,butperhapsnotbecausepeopleareunawareofthecurrentreviews.'Theadv
5、ertisingdirectorfirstneedstodeterminetherelativeproportionofmoviegoersthatchoosetoseeSilverScreenfilms.第一个需要对外界进行的评估就是人群中选择SS的比例。Thatwillhelphimtounderstandhismarketshare.Ifthepopulationingeneralisattendingless,thenhemaystillbeout-profitinghiscompetitors,despitehisindividualsalesdecrease.Infac
6、t,hisrelativesalescouldbeincreasing.这几句话是对分枝论点的三段式演绎,即总体人数减少,她有可能还有竞争力,只要他的相对份额更多,竞争能力强,有可能他挣的更多Determiningwherehestandsinhismarketwillhelphimtocreateandimplementanactionplan.最终的anactionplan不就是广告吗,在段末尾很明显(尽管换了个词)的点了一下题。Anotherimportantthingtoconsderistherelativecostofattendingmoviestothecurren
7、tstandardofliving.第二个需要考虑的就是当前的人们平均生活水平。Ifthestandardoflivingisdecreasing,itmaycontributetoanoveralldecreaseinattendance.Inthatcase,advertisingcouldbeveryhelpful,inthataclevercampaigncouldemphasizethelowcostofmoviesascomparedtomanyother
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