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2023-2024学年高中书面表达主题分类训练10篇学校生活1.(2023·广东省·模拟题)假定你是李华，你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加，内容包括：1.时间；2.活动安排；3.欢迎他表演节目。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。          学科网（北京）股份有限公司 2023-2024学年高中书面表达主题分类训练10篇学校生活1.(2023·广东省·模拟题)假定你是李华，你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加，内容包括：1.时间；2.活动安排；3.欢迎他表演节目。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。          学科网（北京）股份有限公司 【答案】DearAllen,Howiseverythinggoing?OurschoolwillholdamusicfestivalnextSundaymorningintheschoolhall.AndI’mwritingtoinviteyoutojoinus.Theopeningceremonywillstartat9:00am,andtheschoolmasterwilldeliveraspeech.Thentherewillbevariousfantasticperformancesplayedbytalentedstudents.Youaredefinitelywelcometoshowuponstage,whichwilladdcolorandfuntoourfestival.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Bestwishes,LiHua【解析】今年的书面表达要求考生写邮件，告知英国朋友音乐节的情况。【详解】首先确定提纲。先介绍写作目的，之后介绍音乐节的时间、活动安排等具体信息，最后欢迎他表演节目。第二，根据提纲，确定关键词语，如：Howiseverythinggoing?amusicfestival，intheschoolhall，Theopeningceremony等。第三，注意选用合适的连接词将各要点串联起来。【点睛】本文内容完整，详略得当。并使用了高级句式。如：Youaredefinitelywelcometoshowuponstage,whichwilladdcolorandfuntoourfestival.定语从句。提升了文章档次。2.(2023·广东省·期末考试)假定你是李华，你们学校上周组织了一次“参观太空科技馆”的实践活动。请给英国笔友Jackson写一封信分享你参加本次活动的经历。内容包括：1.活动的时间和地点；2.活动的内容；3.活动的感受。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearJackson, 学科网（北京）股份有限公司          Yours,LiHua【答案】DearJackson,Iamgenuinelydelightedtotellyouofmy“VisittoaSpaceScienceandTechnologyMuseum”organizedbyourschoollastweekend.WesetofffortheSpaceMuseuminGuangzhouat8:00amonSunday.Onarrival,somevolunteersgavebriefintroductionoftheastronautlife,beforeourlookingthroughphotosofhumanexplorationinspace.ThenwejoinedinVRgamesofwalkingonthemoonjoyfully.Weweregivenopportunitiestoobservestarsbyahugetelescope,whichgreatlysatisfiedourcuriosity.Throughtheactivity,notonlydidIrealizethebraveryofastronauts,butalsoIexperiencedsomescientifictoolsforspaceexploration.Idohopeyouhavethechancetotakepartinsucharewardingtour.学科网（北京）股份有限公司 Yours,LiHua【解析】1.词汇积累高兴的：delighted→glad机会：chance→opportunity动身前往：setofffor→leavefor参加：takepartin→participatein2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Iamgenuinelydelightedtotellyouofmy“VisittoaSpaceScienceandTechnologyMuseum”organizedbyourschoollastweekend.拓展句：Iamgenuinelydelightedtotellyouofmy“VisittoaSpaceScienceandTechnologyMuseum”whichwasorganizedbyourschoollastweekend.【点睛】[高分句型1]Weweregivenopportunitiestoobservestarsbyahugetelescope,whichgreatlysatisfiedourcuriosity.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]Throughtheactivity,notonlydidIrealizethebraveryofastronauts,butalsoIexperiencedsomescientifictoolsforspaceexploration.(运用了部分倒装句)3.(2023·浙江省·月考试卷)假定你是李华，你校英文网站将开设一个新专栏，旨在加强师生线上沟通。请你给外教Jason写封邮件，请他帮忙指导。邮件内容包括：1.表达问候；2.介绍新专栏；3.指导内容。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearJason, 学科网（北京）股份有限公司          Yours,LiHua【答案】DearJason,Howareyou?YouhavealwaysbeenconcernedaboutourEnglishlearning.Onbehalfofmyclassmates,Iwouldliketothankyou.NowwearegoingtoopenanewcolumnontheschoolEnglishwebsite,whichincludesonlinedialoguebetweenteachersandstudents,providingmaterialsandansweringquestionsfromstudents.Weexpectitwillplayagoodbridgeroleforbothteachersandstudents.Asforthenameofthisnewcolumnandotherdetails,wedohopeyoucangiveussomespecificguidance.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua学科网（北京）股份有限公司 【解析】1.词汇积累代表：onbehalfof→inthenameof想要做某事：wouldliketodosth.→feellikedoingsth.期待：expect→anticipate明确的：specific→pointed2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：YouhavealwaysbeenconcernedaboutourEnglishlearning.Onbehalfofmyclassmates,Iwouldliketothankyou.拓展句：KnowingthatyouhavealwaysbeenconcernedaboutourEnglishlearning,Iwouldliketothankyouonbehalfofmyclassmates.【点睛】【高分句型1】NowwearegoingtoopenanewcolumnontheschoolEnglishwebsite,whichincludesonlinedialoguebetweenteachersandstudents,providingmaterialsandansweringquestionsfromstudents.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)【高分句型2】Asforthenameofthisnewcolumnandotherdetails,wedohopeyoucangiveussomespecificguidance.(运用了省略that引导的宾语从句)4.(2023·浙江省·模拟题)假设你是李华，某国际学校校书画社主席，昨天下午外教Mr.Black应邀给书画社作题为“AShortHistoryofWesternPainting”的讲座。请你给外教写一封感谢信，内容包括：1.感谢对方作讲座；2.同学们的收获；3.希望有机会再次邀请。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearMr.Black,   学科网（北京）股份有限公司        Yours,LiHua【答案】DearMr.Black,     Firstofall,Iwouldliketothankyouforyourlectureentitled“AShortHistoryofWesternPainting”.     Thelecturewasveryinformative,throughwhichthestudentshaveadeeperunderstandingofthehistoryofWesternpainting.Thestudents’interestandenthusiasmforwesternpaintinghavebeengreatlyimproved,andsomestudentsevenmakeuptheirmindstogoabroadtolearnWesternpainting.     Allthestudentshopethatwecaninviteyoutogiveusmorelectures.                                                                                                                                                     Yours,                                                                                                                                                    LiHua【解析】1.词汇积累热情：enthusiasm→passion提高：improve→enhance首先：firstofall→inthefirstplace决定做某事：makeupone’smindtodo→bedeterminedtodo学科网（北京）股份有限公司 2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Firstofall,Iwouldliketothankyouforyourlectureentitled“AShortHistoryofWesternPainting”.拓展句：Firstofall,Iwouldliketothankyouforyourlecturewhichwasentitled“AShortHistoryofWesternPainting”.【点睛】[高分句型1]Thelecturewasveryinformative,throughwhichthestudentshaveadeeperunderstandingofthehistoryofWesternpainting.(运用了“介词+which”引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]Allthestudentshopethatwecaninviteyoutogiveusmorelectures.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)5.(2023·山东省·期末考试)假定你是李华，你校英语俱乐部将于下周举行主题为"ThequalityIvaluemost"的英语演讲比赛，请你准备一篇演讲稿参赛，内容包括：1.你的看法；2.给出理由。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3.请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。TheQualityIValueMost   Goodmorning，everyone!    学科网（北京）股份有限公司        Thankyouforyourattention.【答案】TheQualityIValueMost   Goodmorning，everyone!Qualitieswilldeterminewhatyoucanachieve.ThequalitywhichIthinkisofthemostimportanceisthespiritofcraftsmanship.Asweallknow，craftsmanshipismainlymadeupofperseverance，integrity，diligenceandexpertise.Taketheclockrestorationmaster，WangJin，forexample.Withskillfulhandsandamodestheart，Mr.Wangspenthiswholeliferestoringclocksdatingbackhundredsofyears，whichnotonlyhelpspreservetraditionalskillsbutalsobringstheclocksbacktolife.Mostimportantly，hisinnovationandunremittingdevotionensurethattheartofclockrepairingstandsthetestoftime.Therefore，frommyperspective，thespiritofcraftsmanship，whichincludesdevotingourselvestowork，sharpeningourskillsandovercomingdifficultieswithperseverance，isthenecessaryandsignificantqualityforushumanbeings.Thespiritofcraftsmanshipiswhathashelpedagreatnumberofachievementmakers，anditiswellworthpossessing. Thankyouforyourattention.【解析】高分句型一：Asweallknow，craftsmanshipismainlymadeupofperseverance，integrity，diligenceandexpertise.译文：众所周知，工匠精神主要由毅力、诚信、勤奋和专业知识组成。分析：这句话使用了as引导的非限制性定语从句。学科网（北京）股份有限公司 高分句型二：Withskillfulhandsandamodestheart，Mr.Wangspenthiswholeliferestoringclocksdatingbackhundredsofyears，whichnotonlyhelpspreservetraditionalskillsbutalsobringstheclocksbacktolife.译文：王先生以娴熟的双手和谦逊的心，毕生致力于修复数百年前的钟表，这不仅有助于保存传统技艺，也使钟表复活。分析：这句话使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。6.(2023·广东省·模拟题)假定你是校英语报的记者李华，最近你校举办了第一届“英语文化节”活动。请你用英语写一篇短文报道此次活动，内容包括：1.活动时间；2.活动内容；3.简短评论注意：1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。        学科网（北京）股份有限公司   【答案】TheFirstEnglishCultureFestivalToimprovestudents’enthusiasmforlearningEnglish,thefirstEnglishCultureFestivalwasheldinourschoolonMarch20.Allstudentsofourschoolparticipatedinit.First,weheardanEnglishlectureofferedbyaBritishprofessor,whotoldusabouttheroadtomodernEnglish.ListeningtotheinterestinghistoryofEnglish,wehadabetterunderstandingofit.Then,afterarrivingattheschoolhall,weenjoyedanEnglishmoviewiththeutmostconcentration.Last,withthehelpofourforeignteachers,wemadedeliciousBritishfood.Theactivitybenefitedusalot.NotonlydiditgetusunderstandEnglishbetterbutalsoenrichedourschoollife.【解析】1.词汇积累提高：improve→boost参加：participatein→takepartin另外，还有：then→besides理解：understand→makeout2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Then,afterarrivingattheschoolhall,weenjoyedanEnglishmoviewiththeutmostconcentration.拓展句：Then,afterwearrivedattheschoolhall,weenjoyedanEnglishmoviewiththeutmostconcentration.【点睛】【高分句型1】First,weheardanEnglishlectureofferedbyaBritishprofessor,whotoldusabouttheroadtomodernEnglish.（运用了who引导非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】NotonlydiditgetusunderstandEnglishbetterbutalsoenrichedourschoollife.（运用了倒装句）7.(2023·广东省·期末考试)校英文报“SportsStories”栏目征文。请你以“GreatMomentsintheSportsMeet”为题，写一篇短文，记录上周五至周六你校举行的运动会，内容包括：学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1.运动会概况；2.难忘的瞬间；3.你的感想。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.文中不能出现真实姓名与学校。GreatMomentsintheSportsMeet          【答案】GreatMomentsintheSportsMeetLastFridayandSaturday,ourschoolhelditsannualsportsmeetontheplayground.Itwasahugesuccess,学科网（北京）股份有限公司 withstudentsparticipatinginvarioussports,includingrunning,highjump,andlongjump.Oneunforgettablemomentwasthe4×100mrelayracewhenourclassbroketheschoolrecord.Thecheersfromthecrowdwereoverwhelming.Despitelosinglastyear,theteam’shardworkanddedicationthisyearpaidoff,demonstratingthetruespiritofteamwork.Overall,thesportsmeetwasareminderthatsportsarenotjustaboutwinningorlosing,butaboutteamwork,perseverance,andrespect.Itwasinspiringtoseeeveryonecometogetherandcelebratethejoyofsports.【解析】1.词汇积累各种各样的：various→varietiesof令人难忘的：unforgettable→memorable总的说来：overall→onthewhole参加：participatein→takepartin2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Itwasahugesuccess,withstudentsparticipatinginvarioussports,includingrunning,highjump,andlongjump.拓展句：Itwasahugesuccess,withstudentsparticipatinginvarioussports,whichincluderunning,highjump,andlongjump.【点睛】[高分句型1]Oneunforgettablemomentwasthe4×100mrelayracewhenourclassbroketheschoolrecord.(运用了when引导的限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]Overall,thesportsmeetwasareminderthatsportsarenotjustaboutwinningorlosing,butaboutteamwork,perseverance,andrespect.(运用了that引导的同位语从句)8.(2023·江苏省·期中考试)第一节(满分15分)假定你是校学生会主席李华，学校将举行“职业初体验（ExperienceYourFutureJob）”活动，请你写一封邮件邀请留学生Jack参加，要点如下：1.活动目的；2.活动安排；3.其他。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。学科网（北京）股份有限公司 DearJack,          Yours,LiHua【答案】DearJack,OnbehalfofourStudents’Union,I’mwritingtoinviteyoutoparticipateinanactivitycalled“ExperienceYourFutureJob”tobeheldnextSaturday.Aimedatgettingstudentspreparedfortheirfuturejobhunting,avarietyofactivitiesaredesignedbasedonreal-lifesituations,whereparticipantsarefreetotryanytypeofoccupationstheyarecuriousabout.Besides,professionalswillassistusduringtheprocesssothatwecangettimelyhelpifneeded.学科网（北京）股份有限公司 Startingfrom2:00p.m.theactivitywilllastforthreehours.Ifyouareinterested,pleasegototheplayground20minutesinadvancetogetdressedup.I’mlookingforwardtomeetingyouthere!                                                                             Yours,                 LiHua【解析】略9.(2023·广东省·期末考试)为了庆祝中国的第八个航天日,你校举办了一系列的主题活动。请你写一篇英语短文报道此次事件,内容包括:1.活动的主要内容;2.同学们的感受。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。CelebratingChinaAerospaceDay        学科网（北京）股份有限公司    【答案】CelebratingChinaAerospaceDayTocelebratethe8thChinaAerospaceDay,ourschoolhostedaseriesofthemedevents.ThemainactivitiesincludedalectureonthehistoryofChinaˈsaerospaceindustryandarocket-buildingcompetition.ThelecturecoveredthemilestoneachievementsofChinaˈsaerospaceindustry.Intherocket-buildingcompetition,thewinningteamlaunchedtheirmodelrocketintotheskywithgreatsuccess.Thestudentswerethrilledandinspiredbytheevents.ManyexpressedtheiradmirationforChineseastronautsˈbraveryandperseverancetocarryouttheirmissions.TheytookgreatprideinChinaˈsachievementsinspaceexploration.【解析】略10.(2023·广东省·期末考试)你班最近举行了一次题为“海洋探索”的班会。请根据下表内容给学校英语报写一篇报道，介绍讨论情况并发表你的观点。赞同理由1.帮助我们更好了解海洋生态系统；2.找到新资源。反对理由1.已造成海洋污染；2.过度探索将带来持续的不良后果。你的观点……提示词：生态系统ecosystem注意：写作词数应为80左右。   学科网（北京）股份有限公司        【答案】参考范文1:Recently,wehavehadaclassmeetingonseaexploration.Studentshavedividedopinionsaboutit.Somethinkitimportanttoexploretheseabecausewecanhaveabetterunderstandingofthemarineecosystem.Secondly,theybelieveseaexplorationmakesitpossibletofindnewresources.However,othersviewthatithascausedseriouspollution.Besides,theybelievetheover-explorationoftheseawillleadtocontinuouslybadresults.Inmyopinion,it’snecessarytocarryonseaexplorationandwemustkeepabalancebetweenseaexplorationandseaconservation.参考范文2:Recently,ourclasshadameetingon“ExploringtheOcean.”Wehadaproductivediscussion,andI’dliketosharetheoutcomesandexpressmyviewpoint.Manystudentsagreedwithoceanexplorationfortworeasons.Firstly,itdeepensourunderstandingofthemarineecosystem.Additionally,exploringtheoceanmayrevealnewresourcesthatbenefitindustriesandhumandevelopment.However,somestudentshighlightedthepollutioncausedbyhumanactivitiesandthepotentialseriousconsequencesofexcessiveexploration.Inmyview,wemuststrikeabalancebetweentheprotectionandexplorationofmarineecosystem.【解析】1.词汇积累学科网（北京）股份有限公司 想要做某事：wouldliketodosth.→feellikedoingsth.此外：additionally→what’smore强调：highlight→emphasize结果：consequence→result2.句式拓展简单句变强调句原句：Manystudentsagreedwithoceanexplorationfortworeasons.拓展句：Itismanystudentswhoagreedwithoceanexplorationfortworeasons.【点睛】【高分句型1】Additionally,exploringtheoceanmayrevealnewresourcesthatbenefitindustriesandhumandevelopment.(运用了动名词作主语和that引导的限制性定语从句)【高分句型2】However,somestudentshighlightedthepollutioncausedbyhumanactivitiesandthepotentialseriousconsequencesofexcessiveexploration.(运用了过去分词短语作后置定语)学科网（北京）股份有限公司