写作基本要领

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1、写作基本要领写作基本要领?使用规范的句子1.完整1)意义的完整Bikesaresopopularinchina.(Bikesaresopopularinchinathatalmosteveryfamilyhasatleastone.)2)结构的完整指代不明Itisincredibletomanypeople.cigarettesmokersspendmoneyforillness.(Itisincredibletomanypeoplethatcigarettesmokersspendmoneyforillness.)省略错误IsaidIhavemorerespectforhim

2、thanhiswife.(IsaidIhavemorerespectforhimthanforhiswife.)断句不严wecouldn’tdecideuponanewcar,thereweremanyattractivemodels.(wecouldn’tdecideuponanewcar,forthereweremanyattractivemodels.)or(wecouldn’tdecideuponanewcar.Thereweremanyattractivemodels.)2.连贯1)代词指向不明确hewasknockeddownbyabicycle,butitwasn

3、otserious.(hewasknockeddownbyabicycle,butwasnotseriouslyhurt.)2)不定式、分词、动名词的逻辑主语与句子主语不一致Tosucceedinascientificresearchproject,persistenceisneeded.(Tosucceedinascientificresearchproject,oneneedstobepersistent.)3)结构不平行Formerly,sciencewastaughtbythetextbookmethod,whilenowthelaboratorymethodisemp

4、loyed.(Formerly,sciencewastaughtbythetextbookmethod;nowitistaughtbythelaboratorymethod.)Itwasbothalongceremonyandverytedious.(Theceremonywasbothlongandtedious.)4)主次不分，重点不突出Thecompetitionforcollegeenrollmentisextremelykeenthisyearandthecandidatesspenddaysandnightspreparingfortheentranceexamin

5、ationandtheyneglecttheirhealthandsothenewspaperscarryarticlesurgingteachersandparentstotakeupthisproblemseriously.(asthecompetitionforcollegeenrollmentisextremelykeenthisyear,thecandidatesspenddaysandnightspreparingfortheentranceexamination,neglectingtheirhealth.Inviewofthis,thenewspaperscar

6、ryarticlesurgingteachersandparentstotakeupthisproblemseriously.)3.简练1)删除（多余成分）Thedistantexplosionwasaudibletotheear.(Thedistantexplosionwasaudible.)TherearefourcompaniesinShanghai,andanyofthemcansupplyuswithspareparts.(anyofthefourcompaniesinShanghaicansupplyuswithspareparts.)2)替换（用词或词组替代从句）

7、Thebottlesthatareplacedontheshelfcontainsomechemicalsthathavebeennewlydiscovered.(Thebottlesontheshelfcontainnewchemicals.)mr.Li,whoismyfavoriteprofessor,hasreceivedadistinguishedTeacheraward.(mr.Li,myfavoriteprofessor,hasreceivedadistinguishedTeac