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1、(一)审题错误TaibaiMountainisafamousplaceofinterestinShaanxiProvince.Ithasitsspecialscenesalltheyearround,andspringisthebesttimetovisitit.Whenspringcomes,themountainsarecoveredwithagreatmanygreentalltreesandallkindsofcolorfulwildflowers.Itissobeautifulthatalotofvisitorsco
2、mehereandenjoyitsbeautyeveryday.Butafewyearsago,someofthevisitorspaidnoattentiontoprotectingtheenvironment.Theyusedtothrowlotsofrubbishsuchasplasticbags,fruitskinsandwastepaperontheground.Sometimestheybrokesomebranches,pickedflowersandevenkilledbirds.Someevenmadefir
3、esintheforesttocookfood.Howdangerousitwas!Luckilyenough,thelocalgovernmenthasbeguntodosomethingtostoppollutingthearea.Greatchangeshavetakenplacehere.(二)文体格式错误Monday,March12th,2007 Sunny ItisMarch12thtoday.Athal
4、fpasteight,alltheteachersandstudentsinourschoolgatheredinfrontoftheschoolgate.ThenwewentonfoottotheWesternHilltoplanttrees. Beforewestartedworking,theteachergaveusatalkontheimportanceofplantingtrees.Hesaidthattreescanhelptokeeptheairclean,protectusfromstrongwi
5、ndandsandandmakeourcitymorebeautiful.Thenheshowedushowtoplanttreesandaskedeachofustoplantatleastfivetrees. Afterthatwestartedworking.Somestrongboysdugholes,somecarriedwaterandsomegirlsputtreesintheholes.Weallworkedhard.Amongus,LinTao,ourmonitorsetagoodexamplet
6、ous.Thoughhewasill,heworkedharder.Whenhefinishedhistask,hewentontohelpothers.Hewaswetalloverafterwork.Lookingatthelinesoftheyoungtrees,wesmiledhappily.(三)人称和时态误用Thecomputer—ahigh-techproduct,hasbecomesopopularthatitisseeninalmosteveryfamily.Itisplayinganimportantrol
7、einoureverydaylife.Thecomputerhelpsushandlemanymatters:officialbusiness,chatonline,study,sendinge-mails,long-distanceeducationandentertainmentsuchaslisteningtomusicandwatchingvideo. Butwealsoknowthatthecomputerisbadforoureyes,especiallyfortheyoungkids’.Nowthe
8、rearemoreandmorechildrenwhohavetowearglassesinordertoseeclearly.Manychildrenbecomenear-sighted,andtheyaredoingworseandworseintheirstudiesb
