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1、精编短文改错（附答案）1Itwasraining.Inhiswayhomefromschool.Petersawanoldmanwalkingwithdifficultintherainwithoutaumbrella.Peterwentuptohimandofferedsharetheumbrellawithhim.Theoldmaninpoorhealth,soPetertriedtoholdtheumbrella.Butheistooshorttoholdithighenough.Whilewonderedwhattodo,hesawtheoldman'sstickandhada
2、nidea.Hehadtiedthesticktothehandleoftheumbrellaandmadethemlonger.Nowwesharedtheumbrella.Peterwasveryhappy.2DearEditor,IliveinShenyangCity.Nearmyhomethereisthefamoustemple,whichwasbuiltinthelateMingDynasty.Onthewallsofthetempleismanypictures,whichshowushowpeopleatthattimelive.Thetempleisofgreatly
3、value.Iamworriedaboutitbecausesomeofthepicturesaredamagedbyairpollution,whichcomesfromhumanbeings.Hundredoftouristsvisitthetempleeveryday.Thecarbondioxidefromtheirbreathisdestroyedthepictures.Ithinkonewaytosolvetheproblemistoputglasswallsinfrontofthepictures.Second,anumberofvisitorsshouldbelimit
4、ed.Andweshouldbuildawebsitewherepeoplecanlookthepicturesandthetemplethere.Yourssincerely,Dali3ItisfourdayssinceMotheracceptedtheoperation.Sheisfeelingmuchmorebetter.Thedoctorstoldmetheoperationwassuccessful,butbecauseheroldage.shehadtostayinhospitalforothertwoweeks.Thedoctorsalsosayitwasquitenec
5、essaryforhertodoso.Weexpecttogetafullreportintwoandthreedays.Pleasetellthegoodnewstotherestoffamilyassoonaspossible.Youneedn’ttocomehere.I’mabletolookafterMotherofmyself.You’dbettersendflowerstoMother.Shewillfeelhappily.4BeforeIwenttoseniormiddleschool,somepeoplestoldme.“Alifeofseniormiddleschoo
6、lisunforgettable.”WhileIfirstenteredmyseniormiddleschool,everythingseemedunpleasant.Faceallthestrangethingsaroundme,Ioftenmissmyoldfriendsandclassmates.Ididn’twanttotalktoothersormakefriendwithothers.Littlebylittle,myschoolrecordswentfrombadtoworse,especialmymaths.Icouldn’tevenpasstheexam.Ilostt
7、heheartandmissedthehappytimesalldaylong.Itoldme,“Idon’tbelongit.Idon’tlikethelifehere.”5WhiletraveledtoParisonabus,Ibecameverysick.Awell-dressingmanonthebushelpedmegreatly.Hetookmeoffthebus,foundoutwherethedoctor’soffice,and
