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1、记叙文写作的注意事项一、交代背景文章的开头应概括地介绍事件发生的时间、地点、人物以及事件等二、详略得当过多不必要的细节会冲淡文章的主题。因此,在细节的选择上应注意选择与主题密切相关的内容,从而点明文章中心。三、条理清晰记叙文一般按照时间顺序或空间顺序来描述,要求层次清晰、条理清楚。例文–Atrafficaccident首段:首段概括交代事件发生的时间、地点、人物等信息Aweekago,Iwitnessedatrafficaccidentinarainydayonmywaytoschool,whichstillstic
2、ksinmymind.例文–Atrafficaccident中心段:交待细节,注重在how;交待细节时应注意的事项?过多不必要的细节会冲淡文章的主题。中心段细节描写练习请找出下文与主题无关的细节AnaccidentThisafternoonIwentoutinthecountrytoseemygrandparents.AfterIgotoutthereIdecidedtotakeashortdrive.IdrovedowntoEastGreenwich,whichisabouteightmilesfromCentre
3、ville.WhilecominghomeIwasobligedtofollowtherailroadforamileortwo.WhenIhadgoneabouthalfamileIheardaterriblewhistlingaheadofme.Oncomingneartowherethesoundcamefrom,Idiscoveredthatanexpresstrainhadrunintotherearendofafreighttrain.Fortunatelynoonewasseriouslyhurt,al
4、thoughIheardonmansaythathenevergotshakenupsobadlyinhislifebefore.Theengineoftheexpresstrainwassomewhatdisabled,asthecow-catcherwasbrokenandthehead-lightandthesmoke-stackwereknockedoff.Nooneseemedtoknowthecauseoftheaccident.例文–Atrafficaccident中心段:交待细节,注重在how;交待细
5、节时应注意的事项?过多不必要的细节会冲淡文章的主题。因此,在细节的选择上应注意选择与主题密切相关的内容,从而点明文章中心。从首段也可看出文章重点在trafficaccident和stickinmymind例文–Atrafficaccident中心段赏析Itwasabout7:00onFridaymorning,(Oct.31st).(补充说明时间)IwaswalkingthroughthepedestrianoverpassnearmyschoolwhenIwasshockedbythescreechofacar.
6、(事情的起因)Isawamanknockeddownbyablackcar.Soonmanycarswerejammedthere.IgotthereandfoundthatbesideablackBenzlayamiddle-agedmaninapoolofblood.(交代一些细节)Thestreetturnedchaotic.(事情的大致经过)Afteramoment,thepoliceandanambulancearrived.Thevictimwasinstantlysenttothehospital.(事
7、情的结果)注意空间的移动:Igotthere…例文–Atrafficaccident结尾段赏析结尾段:可适当发表一点议论Inmyopinion,thepedestrianshouldhavetakentheoverpasswhencrossingthestreet.Besides,thedrivermighthavedriventoofast,regardlessofsuchbadweather.Anyway,Ibelieveaccidentsmaybeavoidedifwebecomeawareoftheimpor
8、tanceofsafety.(结尾)记叙文常用句式——首段:交代主题ItwasthemostexcitingmomentthatIhaveeverexperienced.Allthroughmyseniorhighschool,Icouldn’tforget…Intheyearsthatfollowedtheeventfrequentlyflo
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