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1、2018浙江新高考之读后续写continuation-writing对第五档(21-25)作文的描述:与所给短文融洽度高,与所提供各段落、开头语衔接合理。内容丰富,应用了5个以上短文中标出的关键词语。所使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确,可能有些许错误,但完全不影响意义表达;有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使所续写短文结构紧凑;Tipsforwriting:1.Thoroughreading2.Creativeplotting(构思)3.Swiftdrafting4.Carefulpolishing5.
2、NeatcopyingThepresentReading:2.theoldlady:gotupearlytobereadyforthepostputonherbestdressLanguageappreciation:agoodwaytodescribeone’smentalactivities(Para.4)Twospotsofcolorbrightenedhercheeks.Shewasexcitedlikeachild.Shewouldenjoyherday.Shewassoeagerto
3、getapresent.“Apersonwasverynervous.”Hisheartwasbeatingwildly.Hewassweatingallover.sheexpected:(Para.6)apresentfamilyaffections;lovefromthedaughter;toberememberedtobeconnected3.Myra,thedaughter(Para.2-3)JudgingfromtheinformationinPara.2-3aboutMyra,wha
4、tkindofpersonwasMyra?Keywords:rareoccasionsseldomwrotebusyamedalfortheaged2.Theoldlady1.others3.Myra?Puzzle:WouldMyrapleasehermotherorletherdown?Step2:CreativeplottingReminder:Beingcreativedoesn’tmeanyoucanwritewhateveryoulike.Continuationwritingmust
5、bedesignedinalogicalandreasonableway.Andontopofthatbeingcreativewillbeappreciated.logic+creativityTheysay….Everyone…kind…herdaughter...?…rareoccasions……seldom……amedal……bestclothes…excited……Mrs.Morrison…Mrs.Grant…Johnnie...…slipper…cardigan…lamp…Shest
6、oodbythewindow,watching.________________________________________Almostreluctantly(unwillingly)shetoretheenvelopeopen._________________________WouldMyrapleasehermotherorletherdown?Myra?Shestoodbythewindow,watching._____________________________________
7、_______________Almostreluctantlyshetoretheenvelopeopen.__________________________________________Useatleast5ofthefollowingwords:please,postman,arrangefor,lovely,parcels,write,birthday,presentsStep3:SwiftdraftingOriginalending:Shestoodbythewindow,watc
8、hing.Thepostmanturnedroundthecorneronhisbicycle.Herheartbeatfast.Johnniehadseenhimtooandrantothegate.Thenclatter,clatterupthestairs.Johnnieknockedatherdoor.“Granny,granny,”heshouted,“I‘vegotyourpost.”Hegaveherfourenvelopes.Threewereunsealedcardsfromo