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1、英语书面表达EnglishCompositionWriting[写作内容]1.以约30词概括上文的主要内容。2.以约120词就“制定规划与达成目标”这一主题进行议论，内容包括：(1)海狸修水坝的故事给你的启示是什么？(2)请结合你的生活经历阐述“制定规划与达成目标”之间的关系。[写作要求]1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事．也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。[评分标准]概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯Beaversareverydiligentdam-builder
2、swhocanbuildextremelygooddams.However,theysometimesdon’tknowwheretobuildthedamsorwhichdamsshouldbefixedonlybecausetheyhavenoconsciousnesstomakeaplan.Thebeavers’storyillustratestheimportanceofplanning.Withoutaplanthebestintentionsandeffortswillnotproduceresults.Weshould
3、n’tworkblindlybuthaveaclearideaofourpurpose,theactionsneededtoachieveit,andhowtheseshouldbeordered.Asajuniorstudent,IachievedconsiderablesuccessinlearningEnglishthroughthecombinationofhardworkandplanning.Ipreparedgoodmaterialswiththehelpofmyteacher,madeplansformydailys
4、tudyandself-monitoredthewholeprocessofmylearning.Imaderapidprogressandbecameveryconfident.IthinkIcouldn’thavedoneitwithoutagoodplan.Diligenceisakeytosuccess,butinmyopinion,goodplanisalsoessential.Throughplanning,wecandevelopcleargoals,findmoreefficientandeffectivemetho
5、dsandthushavemoreopportunitiestoreachourgoalsthanthroughhardworkingalone.AppreciateandlearnthethreewellorganizedcompositionsfromstudentsTheEssayWhatmakesagoodessay?DiscussionContentEverythingneededincludedwhichisrelatedtoyourview.(内容要完整)Structure*Goodbeginningandending
6、(好的开头结尾)*Wellorganizedandsmoothlydeveloped(结构合理,行文流畅)*Properlinkingwordsbetweensentences1.Basedonthispassage,____________________,makingaplanbeforedoingsomethingisessential.2.____________,we’llcompleteourgoalwithareasonableplan.3.___________________________it’simportan
7、ttohaveaplan.asfarasIamconcernedOnthecontraryasfarasIamconcernedonthecontraryasaconsequence使用恰当的连接词UseproperlinkingwordsAsaconsequence4.Asanoldsayinggoes,“nopains,nogains”,_____________________,Ithink,onlybytakingpainstocompleteourgoalswithaplan,canweattainsuccess.5.__
8、_______________,Ihaverealizedthevitalimportanceofastrongplan.howeverSincethenhoweverSincethenLanguage*NoChinglish(避免中
