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1、智课网TOEFL备考资料个人陈述批改:文书批改范文_托福写作原文：Myfavoritetoyinchildhoodwasakitforcircuitswhichlookedverysimilartothepopulartoy,SnapCircuitsExtreme,soldinAmericanowadays.IstillrememberthatthefirsttimeIfoundthatcircuitskitinthestore,Iearnestlyaskedmymothertobuythatkitformeasapresent.
2、Iwasonlyeightyearsoldatthattime,sobothmymotherandIwerenotawareoftheimportanceofbuyingmethatkittomyfuturecareerpathuntilseveralyearslater.Mystorywithcircuitsthenstarted.Thekitcontainedmorethan50piecesandIspentmuchtimeduringmychildhoodinusingthemtocreatemyownexperiments
3、andbuildoverhundredexcitingprojects.Inretrospect,itisobviousthatmystronginterestindoingworkrelatedcircuitswasdevelopedfromthatperiodandmycreativitywastrainedbythateducationalfungameaswell.InSeptember2010,IwasadmittedtoZhejiangUniversity,oneofthetopthreeuniversitiesinC
4、hina,andIwasenrolledintotheCollegeofEngineeringinZhejiangUniversity,whichalsoranksasoneofthetopthreeengineeringschoolsinChina.Motivatedbymydreamtobeanoutstandingelectricalengineer,IpouredmyendeavorintoacademicsenthusiasticallyandreapedwhatIsowed.Irankedamongthetop4%in
5、theCollegeofEngineeringforthefirsttwoyears,andthentopreparemydreamwithadequateknowledge,IdeclaredmajorinElectricalEngineeringinmyjunioryearwithoutanyhesitation.ZhejiangUniversityismostfamousforitsCollegeofElectricalEngineering,andthiswastheprimaryreasonwhyIchosetoatte
6、ndZhejiangUniversity.DuringmyundergraduatestudyinZhejiangUniversity,IamconstantlyachievingandmaintaininganexcellentGPA(3.84/4.00).IhavetakenEngineeringElectromagneticFields&Waves,inwhichIlearnedtheMaxwell'sequations,thefoundationofclassicalelectrodynamics,withstepsand
7、dominantemphasis.Takingsuchspecializedengineeringcoursesprovidedmewithasolidfoundationforworkingattheinterfacebetweenmathematicsandphysics,whicharetherootsofmydream.BesidestakingcoursesinElectricalEngineering,Ialsoattemptedtoextendmyscopebyundertakingsomeextra-curricu
8、larprojectsinElectricalEngineering.Bydoingso,Iwantedtoestablishamorecomprehensiveperceptionofhowthetheoreticalknowledgecould
