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1、⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯最新料推荐⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯Theonlywaytoimprovethesafetyonourownroadistohavestricterpunishmentfordrivingoffenders.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?犯罪A惩罚B人们不愿意失去驾照（risklosingthelicense），还有罚款（faceheavyfines）C震慑犯罪（deterrecklessdriving）Stiffpunis

2、hmentisaneffectivemethodtodeterrecklessdrivinginsomecases.(A+C)Punitivemeasurescanreducecrimebecausedrivingoffendersmaynotrisklosingthelicenseandbefearfuloffacingheavyfines.(B)Roadoffenceswillbeindecline.(c)Thisinterventionisparticularlyeffectivetothosedriversw

3、housedtothinktheycouldbearconsequences.(特定化)A完善交通设施B标识清晰路面平坦C道路更安全(reduceroadfatalities)Transportinfrastructures,roadfacilities,clearsigns,improveroadconditions,同学例子However,punishmentisnottheonlymethodtoreducetheroadfatalities,perfecttransportinfrastructuresare

4、alsosignificant.Roadconditionscanbeimprovedonceclearsignsareavailableonroadfacilities.Inthatcase,driverscanhaveabetterideaoftheroadcondition,whichenablesthemtomakecorrectdecisionswhiledrivingcars.Therefore,theroadsafetywillbeenhanced.However,punishmentisnottheo

5、nlymethodtoreduceroadfatalities,andwell-developedtransportinfrastructuresarealsosignificant.(A+C)Roadconditionscanbeimprovedandclearsignscanbeerected（竖起来）ontheroad.(p)Inthatcase,driverscanhaveabetterideaoftheroadconditions,whichenablesthemtodrivesafely.(p)There

6、fore,theroadsafetywillbeenhanced.(p)1⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯最新料推荐⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯A进行公益宣传(holdawarenesscampaigns)B提高大众安全意识raiseawareness，恪守规则(obeyrules)C道路更安全解释意识：知道自己的行为后果（direconsequences）Holdingawarenesscampaignsalsoplaysanimportantroleinroadsafety.(A+C)Th

7、esecampaignscanraiseawarenessofsafetyinthegeneralpublicandencouragepeopletoobeyrulesbecausetheylearnmoreaboutthedire可怕的consequencesofrecklessdriving.危险驾驶(p)roadsarethereforesaferforusers.(p)Onewaytopreventpeoplefromcommitstreetcrimeistoenforcestiffpunishmentsbe

8、causecitizensarenotwillingatriskoflosingtheirdrivinglicenseandfacingheavyfines.Bydoingthat,itiseasiertodeterrecklessdrivinginordertoimprovethestreetsafety.Stricterpunishment