3、有要点要逐一陈述,适当发挥,不要简单翻译。2、词数150左右。开头已经写好,不计入总词数。3、作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。Conflicts with others are common in everyday life.就此题目,课堂教学分析与设计,我是这样来思考和实施教学的。一、掌握技巧,谋句成篇(一)谋篇此次的书面表达的话题非常贴近日常生活,写作主题是“冲突”,根据中文提示,应按照“描述事件”,“分析冲突”,及“个人见解”这三方面来谋篇。1.描述事件何人:Su Hua and Li Jiang7何事:Du
4、ring the basketball game, Su Hua and Li Jiang bumped into each other, trying to catch the ball. Then they started shouting and yelling, and it turned into a horrible quarrel.2.分析冲突根据中文提示,原因至少要写出两点。可以写以下两方面:(1)遇事不够冷静They were not calm enough and both said some really mean t
5、hings.(2)比赛得失心太重They cared too much about winning and losing.3.个人见解这一部分应是根据考生自己的经历或感想,提出至少两种化解冲突的做法。可以归纳为:To avoid such conflicts, we should be kind to one another, which is essential to enjoying a harmonious life. It is also a virtue to forgive and forget, especially in s
6、uch a competitive and stressful society. Instead of blaming each other, we should communicate more and put ourselves in others’ place.7最后可以加上一个升华句:Don’t be self-centered and try to be considerate. We must learn to handle conflicts calmly and wisely.(二)遣词在高考写作中,表达应尽量避免重复,可以
7、遵循复杂多变的原则,要善于用不同的词或词组,甚至是句型来代换。在这篇书面表达中,对于“对他人表现关怀”就运用到几种不同的说法:be kind to one another, put ourselves in others’ place, try to be considerate.(三)造句书面表达的句式也是有讲究的。可以适当拉长句子,使用从句,并列结构及插入语等方式使得句子变得丰满。例如:To avoid such conflicts, we should be kind to one another, which is essentia
8、l to enjoying a harmonious life. 在这个句子中,既运用到了不定式做目的状语,又用到了which引导的非限制性定语从句。(四)逻辑7好的文章除了合理