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6、hefreedandnvenienebrughtbhighteh,eustbealerttitssideeffetThenlthingeneedtreeberisthateshuldntrltehnlginsteadfallingurselvesbeingntrlled简评本篇的主题是科技改变生活，其影响有正面的，亦有负面的。文章脉络清晰，可分为三个部分：科技给生活以便利；科技给生活带来乐趣；滥用科技会给生活带来威胁和损害。作者以忠告结束全文：科技不可避免地改变生活，关键是人们要支配科技而不是被科技所支配。
7、本篇文章的可取之处主要有两点。首先，文章的脉络清晰。保证一篇文章成功的前提是具备全面、简明的中心思想以及与主题息息相关并互相关联的主题句。主题句可以直接陈述或以含蓄的方式体现在每个段落的开首或末尾。另外，总结性的结尾是一篇文章完整的体现。其次，本文运用了大量的平衡句。平行结构有两种句型：一种是对照句即用相同的结构表述两种截然不同的思想；另一种是平衡句即用相同的结构表达两种相同或相似的思想。本文第二段就包含一组平衡句，如”iththeinventinfvariuseletriheapplianes，huser
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