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1、2016考研英语作文范文:坚持到底,就是胜利 距离2016考研的时间越来越短,为了使自己能够最后决战成功。在考研英语作文的复习备考中,坚持练习是必备的一种备考方式。下面就请大家随文都网校小编一起来看看吧! Directions: Writeanessayof160—200wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing.Inyouressay,youshould 1)describethedrawingbriefly, 2)explainitsintendedmeaning,andthen 3)giveyourcommen
2、ts.YoushouldwriteneatlyontheANSWERSHEET.(20points) 【参考范文】 Inthedrawing,agirlcarriesaspadewithaquestionwherethewaterisinmindafterdiggingoutseveralholesfutilely.Asamatteroffact,thewaterisjustbeneaththeholesthegirlhasdugout,butthegirlstoppeddiggingafterseveraltrialswithoutsucce
3、ss.Howthought-provokingthedrawingconveys! Wecanseefromthedrawingthatifthegirlhasn’tgivenupdiggingafterseveralfutiletrials,thescenerywillbedifferent.Pitifully,thegirldidn’tperseveretotheend.Thereisamaximgoinglikethat:perseverancemeansvictory.Thatistosay,itisperseverancethatbri
4、ngsustosuccess.Therearenumerousexamplesinhistory.TakeEdison,theAmericaninventor,asaninstance.Despitethefailureoftryingmorethansixthousandmaterials,hedidn’tgiveup.Instead,hepersevereduntilhefoundtherightmaterialtomakelightbulbs.Ifhedidn’tpersevereinhisexperimentsafteroversixtho
5、usandfailures,theinventionoflightbulbswouldbepostponedmanyyearsorlonger. Doweoftengiveupaftermanytimesoffailures?Ifyes,wearejustlikethehole-digginggirl;ifno,congratulationstoyou.Justasthesayinggoes:constantdroppingwearsthestone,pleasemakeperseveranceinwhatdeservestobedone. 【
6、亮点表达】 withaquestionwherethewaterisinmind脑中有个问题:水在哪儿呢?(with结构的使用) Howthought-provokingthedrawingconveys!这幅画传递的信息很是发人深省啊!(感叹句的使用) Thescenerywillbedifferent.将会是另一番景象。 Perseverancemeansvictory.坚持就是胜利。 Itisperseverancethatbringsustosuccess.坚持带我们走向成功。(注意强调结构itis...that...的运用)
7、take...asanexample/instance以……为例 perseverein/makeperseverancein(doing)sth.坚持(做)某事 Constantdroppingwearsthestone.滴水石穿 Whatdeservestobedone.值得做的事情。 【参考译文】 在这幅图画中,一个女孩扛着一把铁锹,在挖了几个坑以后,没有见到水,在想水在哪儿呢?事实上,水就在女孩挖的坑的下面,但是这个女孩在挖了几个坑却没见到水后停止了继续挖下去。这幅画传递的信息很是发人深省啊! 从图画中,我们可以看出如果这个女孩
8、在几次失败以后,没有放弃继续挖下去的话,将会是另一番景象。令人可惜的是,这个女孩并没有坚持到底。格言“坚持就是胜利”的意思