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2、dMobilecallminutesfromyear1995to2002inUK.4.Thegraphcomparesthetotalusingtimeof3calltypesintheUKovera7-yearperiodfrom1995.5.ThebarchartpresentstheamountofphonecallsinbillionofminutesmakeintheUKoveraperiodofsevenyearsintothecategoriesoflocal,national/internationalandmobilephonecal

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6、 Friday,February19,2016at11:27FROMSIMON(continued):Herearemysuggestions:1)ThebarchartillustratestrendsindifferenttypesofphonecallintheUnitedKingdomover8yearsfrom1995to2002.2)ThebarchartcomparesfiguresforUKphonecall

7、sintermsofminutesspentonthreetypesofcall(between1995and2002).3)Thebarchartgivesinformationaboutthreetypesoftelephonecall,namelylocal,national/internationalandmobilecalls,intheUKbetween1995and2002.4)ThechartcomparesthetotalnumberofminutesofthreetypesofphonecallmadeintheUKovera7-y

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