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1、如何让你作文瞬间变得“高大上”?Howtopolishoursentences?1.要点可适当整合，用一个句子表达。1)姓名：钱学森出生年月：1911年出生地：上海被誉为“中国航天之父”2)纽约中央公园位于曼哈顿的中央。面积为340万平方米。QianXuesen,____________“fatherofChina’sspaceprogram”,wasbornin1911inShanghai.Centralpark,________thecentreofManhattan,coversanareaof3.4millionsquaremetres.regar
2、dedaslocatedin3)Manystudentsspendalotoftimeplayingcomputergames.It’sawasteoftimeandenergy.Manystudentsspendalotoftimeplayingcomputergames,_______________________________.whichisawasteoftimeandenergy_____________,theyparticipateinprogramsthathelpsociety.settingouttoYunnanTostandout
3、2)Theywanttostandout,sotheyparticipateinprogramsthathelpsociety.Before___________________,wewereveryexcited.2.运用非谓语动词，使句子更简洁，更有文采。1）BeforewesetouttoYunnan,wewereveryexcited.3)ThefilmissetintheancientChina.Itisworthseeing. 4)Whenyoufacedifficulty,youshouldnevergiveup.Thefilm____
4、________________isworthseeing.setintheancientChinaWhenfacingdifficulty__________________,youshouldnevergiveup.____________________,theywerefrightened.WhentrappedintheliftTheydon’tknowwhat___________.todonext.5)Theywerefrightened,whentheyweretrappedinthelift.6)Theydon’tknowwhatthey
5、shalldonext.7)Aftertheysettledinthecity,theybegantohuntforjobs._____________________,theybegantohuntforjobs.Havingsettledinthecity3.运用with结构，使句子更加简洁生动。1)Sinceelva’sphotoalbumiscomingoutthismonth,teenstalkedwithherabouthercareerandlife.2)Oursocietyisdeveloping,differentmodernnewsme
6、diahavecomeintobeing.With______________________________________,teenstalkedwithherabouthercareerandlife.With____________________________,differentmodernnewsmediahavecomeintobeing.Elva’sphotoalbumcomingoutthismonththedevelopmentofoursociety4.借助介词或介词短语巧妙衔接句子。1)BecausetheInternetisde
7、velopingquickly,Icantalktomyfriendsfaraway.2)You’dbettertakeyourowncupsandchopsticks.Youmustn’tusepapercups.___________________,Icantalktomyfriendsfaraway.You’dbettertakeyourowncupsandchopsticks_________________________.Thankstotheinternetinsteadofusingpapercups5.运用恰当的连接词（并列连词、从属连
8、词、和连接副词），增强句子间的逻辑性和紧凑性。1)Newyorkc
