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1、Inmanycountries,thereisnoenoughrecyclingofwastematerials(eg.paper,glass,cans).Whatarethereasonsandhowtosolveit?很多国家，废料的循环利用不尽如人意，原因何在，如何解决?【头脑风暴】废料处置以及再循环利用，比较日本和中国，日本做的更好：分类处理生活垃圾，人们有环保意识，节能意识，废料对于环境的污染很少，废料得到充分的循环利用。相反，中国做得不尽如人意。有些人缺乏环保意识，媒体的宣传力度不足，政府对于

2、乱丢生活的垃圾的现象也没有明确的规范。同时，废料处理基地和废料处理技术也有待改善。【范文赏析】{首段}：背景介绍+争议焦点+写作目的Recyclingthewasteanddevelopingregeneratedmaterialsisalinkthatisessentialforthenationaleconomicconstruction.Alarmingly,itisnotraretoseethatlitterbugsalmostappearineverycornerofindividualcity

3、.Evenworse,thefailuretoproperlyrecyclingwasteswillposeathreattothesustainabledevelopmentofnaturalresources.Thisessayaimstoascertainthereasonsandsolutions.【解析】1.Recyclingthewasteanddevelopingregeneratedmaterialsisalinkthatisessentialforthenationaleconomicc

4、onstruction.收旧利废，发展再生资源是国民经济建设中一个不可缺少的环节。2.Alarmingly,itisnotraretoseethatlitterbugsalmostappearineverycornerofindividualcity.令人担忧的是，每个城市的每个地区几乎都有乱扔垃圾的人。3.Thefailuretoproperlyrecyclingwasteswillposeathreattothesustainabledevelopmentofnaturalresources.不能有效

5、地循环垃圾会对于自然资源的可发展造成严重的威胁。【亮点】1.isessentialfor对于……是重要的2.itisnotraretoseethat……很常见的是……3.poseathreatto……对……造成威胁{二段}：人们为何未能废料循环利用Indeed,whatsomepeoplearedoingiswastingpreciousnaturalresourcesanddisposingofgarbagerandomly.Thereasonswhyrecyclingwastematerialslea

6、vesmuchtobedesiredarenotfartoseek.First,somecitiesfailtoestablishenoughrecyclingsitestocollectandtacklewastematerials.Meanwhile,somecountrieslackefficienttechniquesintermsofwastetreatment.Anothermajorreasonisthatsomepeoplehavelittleknowledgeabouthowtodeal

7、withlifewasteortheysimplylackeco-friendlyconsciousness.【解析】1.Somecitiesfailtoestablishenoughrecyclingsitestocollectandarrangewastematerials.一些城市未能够建立足够的回收站去收集和处理废料。2.Somepeoplehavelittleknowledgeabouthowtodealwithlifewasteortheysimplylackeco-friendlyconsc

8、iousness.人们缺乏怎样处理生活垃圾的知识或者他们仅仅是缺乏一种环保的意识。【亮点】1.……leavemuchtobedesired……远非令人满意2.intermsof在……方面，就……而言{三段}：如果有效地展开废料循环利用Consideringtheseverityofthisissue,someeffectivemeasuresshouldbeadopted.First，relevantdepartmentsof