雅思写作语料库竞技体育是否最益于团队精神.doc

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1、Somepeoplethinkthatthebestwaytoteachchildrentolearntocooperatewithothersisthroughteamsportsatschool，towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?有人认为：通过参加学校的体育运动，是使人学会合作的最佳方法，是否同意?【雅思题库】Somepeoplearguethatschoolsshouldonlyoffersubjectsthatarebeneficialtostudents’futurecareers.Othersubjects,

2、suchasmusicandsports,arenotimportant.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?有人认为：学校应该给孩子们提供便于就业的课程，其他课程，例如音乐课和体育课，不重要，是否同意这个观点。【布局图】首段：背景介绍+争议焦点+作家立场二段：让步原题观点的合理性三段：反驳原题观点之不合理尾段：再次亮明观点写作类型：反对唯一性和最佳性【作家立场】鼓励孩子们从事竞技体育活动是培养他们合作精神和群体性经验的有效策略之一，但是，这不是最佳的、唯一的方式。【范文赏析】【首段】背景介绍+争议焦点+作家立场Growt

3、heducationisoneofthekeywordsofaperson’sdevelopment.Peoplehavebeendebating,formanyyears,whetherthebestapproachtoenhancechildren’scooperativeconsciousnessisthroughencouragingthemtoembarkonsports-relatedactivitiesatschoolwithoutreachinganydefiniteconsensus.Tovoicemyopinion,inspirin

4、gstudentstodiveintosportseventsisoneoftheeffectivestrategiestohelpthemcultivatecooperationspiritandgroupexperience,yet,itisnotthebestandonlyway.【解析】1.Growtheducationisoneofthekeywordsofaperson’sdevelopment成长教育者个人的发展中至关重要。2.embarkonsports-relatedactivitiesv从事和体育相关的活动3.Inspiringst

5、udentstodiveintosportseventsisoneoftheeffectivestrategiestohelpthemcultivatecooperationspiritandgroupexperience.鼓励孩子们从事竞技体育活动是培养他们的合作精神和群体性经验的有效策略之一。【二段】让步原题观点之合理性Indeed,Ihavetoconcedethatthosewhoarguethatsportsactivitiescanhelpyoungadultstonurtureteamworkspiritandraisetheirawar

6、enessofcooperationare,tosomeextent,neverwithouttheirreasons.Somepeoplemightarguethatsportseventscanassiststudentsinlearninghowtocommunicateandassociatewithpeoplearoundthemandthusimprovetheircooperation.Toillustrate,inabasketballteam,teammemberhastolearntotolerateanduniteothers,t

7、heymustworktogetherasateamandsticktogetherasfriendstowinthevictory.Inthissense,campusactivitiescancultivateone’scooperationspirit.【解析】1.nurtureteamworkspiritandraisetheirawarenessofcooperation培养团队精神和合作意识2.howtocommunicateandassociatewithpeoplearoundthem学习如何与人交往交流3.theymustworkto

8、getherasateamandsticktogetherasfriendstowinthev