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1、环境细节描写byKevinSoy读后续写专项训练3Itwasdreadfullycold;itwassnowingfast,andwasalmostdark,aseveningcameon-thelasteveningoftheyear.Inthecoldanddarkness,therewentalongthestreetapoorlittlegirl,bareheadedandwithnakedfeet.Whenshelefthomeshehadslipperson,itistrue;buttheyweremuchtoolargeforherfeet
2、–slippersthathermotherhaduseduntilthen…Thesnowflakesfellonherlongflaxenhair,whichhunginprettycurlsaboutherthroat;butshethoughtnotofherbeautynorofthecold.Lightsgleamedineverywindow,andtherecametoherthesavorysmellofroastgoose,foritwasNewYear’sEve.Anditwasofthiswhichshethought.Yetsh
3、edarednotgohome,forshehadsoldnomatches,andcouldnotbringapennyofmoney.Herfatherwouldcertainlybeather;and,besides,itwascoldenoughathome,fortheyhadonlythehouseroofabovethem;andthoughthelargestholeshadbeenstoppedwithstrawandrags,therewereleftmanythroughwhichthecoldwindwhistled.小结紧扣主题
4、。在有限的篇幅内选择景物要慎重，一定要与主题有密切关联。细致深入。所选景物一定要运用所学过的词汇和语法进行细致深入的描写。相辅相成。环境描写一定要与动作和心理活动等相结合，才能更好完成写作任务。1.请描述自己迷路的经历，运用对环境的描写来营造氛围，为后文做铺垫、烘托自己的心理及体现个人的性格。80词左右。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5、_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________1.请描述自己迷路的经历，运用
6、对环境的描写来营造氛围，为后文做铺垫、烘托自己的心理及体现个人的性格。80词左右。迷路会引起人的不安和焦躁的心理，与之对应的环境描写，可以是天气，比如雨雾等，还可以描写陌生的建筑和自然景色。Iwaslostinthemountainwhichwassettledbyalmostnopeople.Ihadamapinmyhandbuthadnoideawheremypositionwas.Theairseemedwet,asthoughthesymbolofmountains–thehighconcentration-of-oxygenairwasrepl
7、acedbytheuncomfortable,chokingwater.Itwasgoingtorain.Thefearsurroundedmelikeadevil’sfrozen,sharphands.Istruggledtoadjustmymoodbutinvain.2.午夜时分，咖啡馆里只剩下最后一位顾客，他是位双耳失聪、孤寂苦闷的老人。请根据所给的时间和地点及老人的特点，针对小餐馆及周围的环境，设计一段描写，词数80左右。Itwasverylateandeveryonehadleftthecaféexceptanoldman.__________
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