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7、有少许错误,但为尽可能使用较复杂表达方式所致;具备较强的语言应用能力有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑完全达到了预期的写作目的。第四档(16-20分)完成了试题规定的任务:比较准确、清楚地表达了短文的内容应用语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求语法结构和词汇应用基本准确,少许错误主要是因为尝试较复杂语言结构或词汇所致应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑达到了预期的写作目的。第三档(11-15分)基本完成了试题规定的任务。能说出短文的基本内容,但逻辑关系较混乱,要点有遗漏,没有写自己的认识应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求有一些语法结
8、构和词汇的错误,但不影响理解应用简单的语句间连接成分,使全文内容连贯整体而言,基本达到了预期的写作目的。Thepolishedpoints:A.较高级