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Goodafternoon,everyone,OnthemorningofApril29,2007,from10:00to11:00,hundredsofmillionsofstudentsfromprimary,middleschoolsanduniversitiesalloverChinajoinedinanationalstudentsportsprogram.ElevenmillionstudentsinJiangsutookanactivepartinthisprogram.TheMinistryofEducationcallsonstudentstoexerciseforanhoureveryday,inthehopethattheywillhavegoodhealthtoworkfiftyyearsandenjoytheirwholelife.Personally,Ithinkit'sagoodideaforussenior3studentstohavedailyexercise.Althoughwetakeanhouradayforecercise,itiswellworthit.Takingexercisehelpsbuildupourbodyandkeepaclearmind.Therefore,wecanworkmoreefficiently.Thankyou!joinedintookanactivepartininthehopethatPersonallyAlthoughTherefore0７年江苏卷书面表达范文callsoniswellworthbuildup Goodlisteningcanalwaysshowrespect,promoteunderstanding,andimproveinterpersonalrelationship.Manypeoplesuggestthatparentsshouldlistenmoretotheirchildren,sotheywillunderstandthembetter,andfinditeasytonarrowthegenerationgap;teachersshouldlistenmoretotheirstudents,thentheycanmeettheirneedsbetter,andplacethemselvesinagoodrelationshipwiththeirstudents;studentsshouldlistenmoretotheirclassmates,thustheywillhelpandlearnfromeachother,andafriendshipislikelytobeformed.WhatIwanttostressisthateachofusshouldlistenmoretoothers.Showyourrespectandneverstopotherstilltheyfinishtheirtalk;showyouareinterestedbyasupportivesilenceoraknowingsmile;beopen-mindedtodifferentopinionseventhoughyoudon’tlikethem.Inaword,goodlisteningcanreallyenableustogetclosertoeachother.promoteimprovefinditeasytonarrowthegenerationgapthusWhatIwanttostressisthatInaword0８年江苏卷书面表达范文 Howtopolishupyourwriting 书面表达各档次的给分范围和要求第五档（21-25分）完全完成了试题规定的任务:准确、清楚地表达了短文的内容，要点无遗漏应用了较多的语法结构和词汇语法结构和词汇有少许错误，但为尽可能使用较复杂表达方式所致；具备较强的语言应用能力有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑完全达到了预期的写作目的。第四档（16-20分）完成了试题规定的任务:比较准确、清楚地表达了短文的内容应用语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求语法结构和词汇应用基本准确，少许错误主要是因为尝试较复杂语言结构或词汇所致应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑达到了预期的写作目的。 第三档（11-15分）基本完成了试题规定的任务。能说出短文的基本内容，但逻辑关系较混乱，要点有遗漏，没有写自己的认识应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求有一些语法结构和词汇的错误，但不影响理解应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文内容连贯整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。 Thepolishedpoints:A.较高级词汇B.丰富的语法结构C.恰当使用过渡词或过渡句,使文章结构紧凑;D.段落的优化 1.Iusedtolikereadingandwritingpoemsatmiddleschool.2.SuddenlyIthoughtofagoodidea.3.Youcanfindmyhouseeasily.Iusedtotakedelightin/befondofreadingandwritingpoemsatmiddleschool.Allofasudden,agoodideaoccurredtome.Agoodideasuddenlystruckme.Youhavenotrouble/difficultyinfindingmyhouse.Youcanfindmyhousewithoutanydifficulty.较高级的词汇、短语 4.Becausetheweatherwasgood,ourjourneywascomfortable.5.Inourschool,therearetwenty–sixclassrooms.6.Theoldphotomademethinkofmyhappychildhood.Thankstothegoodweather,ourjourneywascomfortable.Ourschoolismadeupoftwenty–sixclassrooms.Ourschoolconsistsoftwenty–sixclassrooms.Theoldphotoremindedmeofmyhappychildhood.较高级的词汇、短语 1.Iusedtotakedelightin/befondofreadingandwritingpoemsatmiddleschool.2.Allofasudden,agoodideaoccurredtome.Agoodideasuddenlystruckme.3.Youhavenotrouble/difficultyinfindingmyhouse.Youcanfindmyhousewithoutanydifficulty.4.Thankstothegoodweather,ourjourneywascomfortable.5.Ourschoolismadeupoftwenty-sixclassrooms.Ourschoolconsistsoftwenty-sixclassrooms.6.Theoldphotoremindedmeofmyhappychildhood.较高级的词汇、短语 1.Whensheheardhehaddied,shewentpalewithsorrow.2.IwaswalkingalongParkRoadtowardstheeast.Atthattime,anelderlymancameoutoftheparkontheothersideofthestreet.丰富的语法结构Onhearingthebadnewsofhisdeath,shewentpalewithsorrow.IwaswalkingalongParkRoadtowardstheeastwhenanelderlymancameoutoftheparkontheothersideofthestreet. 丰富的语法结构3.TheflatisinabuildingonFangcaoStreet.ItisnotfarfromJianxinChineseSchool.4.Heissurprisedthatthelittlegirlknowssomanythings.TheflatisinabuildingonFangcaoStreet,whichisnotfarfromJianxinChineseSchool.Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.Whatsurpriseshimisthatthelittlegirlknowssomanythings. 丰富的语法结构5.Wecanachieveourgoalonlyinthisway.6.Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.Onlyinthiswaycanweachieveourgoal.Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened.Notuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperdidheknowwhathadhappened. 较高级的语法结构1.Onhearingthebadnewsofhisdeath,shewentpalewithsorrow.2.IwaswalkingalongParkRoadtowardstheeastwhenanelderlymancameoutoftheparkontheothersideofthestreet.3.TheflatisinabuildingonFangcaoStreet,whichisnotfarfromJianxinChineseSchool.4.Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.Whatsurpriseshimisthatthelittlegirlknowssomanythings.5.Onlyinthiswaycanweachieveourgoal.6.Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened.Notuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperdidheknowwhathadhappened. 使用恰当的连接词逻辑角度合适的过渡性词汇⑴排序关系⑵并列关系⑶举例关系⑷转折关系⑸因果关系⑹归纳总结⑺递进关系first;firstly;second;secondly;lastbutnotleastand;too;aswellas;alongwith;togetherwithforexample;forinstance;like;suchas;astobut;however;while;though;onthecontrarybecause;since;thanksto;asaresult/consequence(of);thus;thereforeinaword;inshort;tosumup;inconclusionwhat’smore;besides;tomakemattersworse;what’sworse;worsestill;furthermore Thisvillageisverysmall.Ithasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.Ithaschangedalotsince1978.Peopleherearericherthanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.段落优化1Thisvillageisverysmall，whichhasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.However,ithaschangedalotsince1978.Peoplehereareleadingaricherandhappierlifethanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook. AsfarasIamconcerned,foruschildren,weshouldoftengohomeandstaytogetherwithourparentshoweverbusyweare.What’smore,oursocietyshouldorganizeallkindsofactivitiesfortheseniorstohelpthemliveahappylife.Onlywhenallofuscarefortheagedcanwebuildaharmonioussociety段落优化2Ithink,foruschildren,weshouldoftengohomeandstaytogetherwithourparentsthoughwearebusy.Oursocietyshouldorganizeallkindsofactivitiesfortheseniorstohelpthemlivehappily.Wecanbuildaharmonioussocietyonlywhenallofuscarefortheaged. summary---覆盖所有的要点---应用了较高级的词汇和丰富的语法结构---有效地使用了连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯，条理清楚。要点全连接巧结构多样化句型复杂化一篇好文章的标准： EnglishWeekly2th广东电视台二频道即将开播一个新的英语教学节目。节目名称：美国生活对象及目的：帮助中学生了解美国，提高英语水平开播时间：2006年9月1日播出时间：每天下午6:00-6:00(首播)次日上午9:00-9:30(重播) EnglishWeekly1th①广东电视台二频道即将开播一个新的英语教学节目。节目名称：美国生活②对象及目的：帮助中学生了解美国，⑤提高英语水平③开播时间：2006年9月1日④播出时间：每天下午6:00-6:30(首播)次日上午9:00-9:30(重播) ①AnewEnglishprogramcalled“LifeinAmerica”willbebroadcastbyGuangdongTVStation.②ItwillhelpmiddleschoolstudentstohaveabetterknowledgeofbothAmericanlifeanditsculture.③ThisprogramwillbeginonSeptember1st,2006onChannelTwo.④Studentscanwatchitfrom6:00pmto6:30pmeachdayandenjoyitagainfrom9:00amto9:30amthenextday.⑤TheprogramisdesignedtoimprovetheirEnglishaswellasbroadentheirhorizons. AnewEnglishprogramcalled“LifeinAmerica”willbebroadcastbyGuangdongTVStation.ItwillhelpmiddleschoolstudentstohaveabetterknowledgeofbothAmericanlifeanditsculture.ThisprogramwillbeginonSeptember1st,2006onChannelTwo.Studentscanwatchitfrom6:00pmto6:30pmeachdayandenjoyitagainfrom9:00amto9:30amthenextday.TheprogramisdesignedtoimprovetheirEnglishaswellasbroadentheirhorizons.