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1、此资料由网络收集而来,如有侵权请告知上传者立即删除。资料共分享,我们负责传递知识。写给母亲的一封信高考英语作文 点评专家: 赵秀凤,中国石油大学外国语学院教授、博士,全国英语创新大赛顾问委员会副主任,第十届、第十一届全国创新英语大赛评委。 参赛佳作 姓名:张家碧 学校:郑州外国语学校 成绩:97 ALettertoMyMom DearMom, Irecentlyreadthebook,BattleHymnoftheTigerMombyAmyChua.IfoundthatyouandMs.Chuahavealotincommoninparenting.Today,I’dli
2、ketosharesomeofmyviewsonthistopic. Childhoodmemoriesofyourstrict“dos”and“don’ts”camefloodingback.Becausecount-lesshourswereinvestedonpracticingmusicalinsUu-ments,therewasnotevenaslimchanceformetoparticipateinpartiesandschoolplays,letalonefullyenjoytheauthenticpleasuresoffamilylife.Moreover,depriv
3、edofthefreedomtochoosehob-bies,IsometimesfeltthatIwasjustlikealonelypup-petmanipulatedbyothers.Dearmother,3此资料由网络收集而来,如有侵权请告知上传者立即删除。资料共分享,我们负责传递知识。doyoube-lievethattimeandtimeagainIwokeupfrombeau-tifuldreamswithtearsstreamingdownmyface? However,thoughIvelabeleditasabrutalregimenwhenIwasyoung,asI
4、becameheavilyinvolvedinmeoutsideworld,I’vecometorealizethatitwasquiterewardingtohavebeentigertrained.AsGeorgeEliotputslt,”Itneverrainsroses:whenwewanttohavemoreroses,wemustplanttrees”.Thisisastrueof0urgrowingup,especiallyinanunprecedentedlystressfulso-cietyr,Fortunately,tigerparentinghasequippedme
5、withexceptionalstudyhabits,thushelpingmestandoutintheintensecompetition.Furthermore,ithasendowedmewithstrongwillpoweraswellasinnerself-poise,whichbasprovedtobeamostpre-ciousqualityofmine.Finally,thankstoyourfirmdiscipline,notcmlyhaveIcultivatedadiscerningtasteinart,butI’vealsobuiltmyownsetofmoralv
6、alues.Inviewofallthesefacts,tigerparentinghasbenefitedmeinthelorlgrundespitethecostoftheimmediatejoyofanormalcarefreecbildhood. Now,lookingbackonmychildhoodwithyourspecialparentingmethod,Iwanttoextendmysincerestappreciauontoyou,mydearmother.AsIamtocommencemycollegelifenow,Ipromiseyouthat3此资料由网络收集
7、而来,如有侵权请告知上传者立即删除。资料共分享,我们负责传递知识。Illimprovemyselfina“tiger”way,goingallouttofulfillallofmydreams. Love, Daughter 专家点评: 通过这封写给母亲的信,作者把母亲的教育方式和“tigermom”的方式作对比,阐述自己的观点。开篇简洁明了,正文欲扬先抑,强调对“tigertraining”的赞同,依此出发向母