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1、Thereadingpassageandtheprofessorarebothtalkingaboutwhethermedicalinformationshouldberecoredbyelectricaleditioninsteadofthehardcopies.Theauthormentionsthreebenefitsofusingelectronicmedicalrecord,yettheprofessorstatesthatthemetritsoftheadoptionofelectronicrecordsystema

2、renotcertain.Theauthorcitesthatelectronicrecordscanhelpussavealotofmoneyandspace.Wedonothavetousepapertorecordthemedicalinformation,whichmeanswecansimplyduplicateandtransferitinsteadofcopyandfaxit.However,theprofessormentionsthattheuseofelectronicrecordwillnotcutthec

3、ost,becausewestillneedtousetheemergencybackupandthesignature,thatistosay,thecoststillexists.Theauthoralsocitesthatbyusingelectronicrecords,peoplecouldpreventalotofhandwritingerrors,whichmightcauseseriousbadimpactonthepatient.But,theprofessorsaysthateventhouthweusethe

4、electronicrecords,thoseerrorsstillexists,becausewecouldnotpreventtheman-mademistakesandsomeoftheerrorsmightcausedbysomestaffinsteadofthedoctors.Maybetheelectronicrecordsarejusttypedintothesystembythestafflongafterthedoctorfinishedwritingthemdown,sointheprocessthestaf

5、fwillprobablymisinterpretthemeaningonthehardcopied.Theauthorassertsthattheelectronicrecordscanhelpmedicalresearchbyusingitshugedatabase,sotheinformationcouldbeeasilyaccessedfromanyplace,yettheprofessorpointsoutthatpeoplewillstillhardtoaccessthedatatheyaresearchingfor

6、becauseintheUSA,thereareverystrictprivacylawstoprotectthepatients'privateinformation.So,iftheywanttogetintothatsystem,theyneedtogetamountainofpermissions.Andthedoctorcanblockthefilesforanypurpose,sotherecordsarenotaccessedforgranted.总结：1.我不知道为什么我这篇综合打了330words但我觉得我还是

7、在这上面浪费了一些时间，所以我在检查typo的时候没那么认真2.R2这里有个细节是医生需要用penandpaperwhileexaminingthepatient我没写进去