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1、例文一来源：考试大　　Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicMoreCandidatesforCivilServant.Youshouldwriteatleast120words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:　　1、现在有越来越多的大学应届毕业生报考公务员，带来了一定的不利因素;　　2、列举两到三个不利因素加以论述;　　3、你对此有何看法。　　【思路点拨】　　本文是一篇主要论述大学生报考

2、公务员增多的原因和对此看法的文章。从提纲可以看出，文章是侧重分析这一现象背后深层次的原因。所以第一段简单阐述大学生报考公务员增多的现象并分析原因;第二段可用论证或是举实例的方法列举其不利因素;第三段提出作者观点或是针对这一现象的负面影响的对策。　　【参考范文】　　MoreCandidatesforCivilServant　　Nowadaysmanycollegegraduatesapplyforcivilservantpositions.Itistruethatthepositionsareidealintermsofincomes,employmentsecurityandr

3、espectofothers.However,theeverincreasingnumberofapplicantsdoesn'tnecessarilymeanagoodthing.Thefeverforcivilservanthasbroughtsomesideeffects.Thesideeffectsarelistedasfollows:　　Firstly,manystudentsapplyforthepositionsforwrongreasons.Someofthemapplyjustbecausetheirfriendsdoitorbecausetheirparen

4、tswantthem.Some,insteadofaimingatservethepeople,havetheintentionofenjoyingtheinterestsandpowerbroughtbytheirfutureposition.Secondly,toomanycandidatescompeteforlimitedpositions.Takesuchhotpositionsasthoseinthejudicialbranchofgovernmentforexample,itisestimatedthatonematriculateisselectedoutof2

5、00candidates.Moreworse,withtheflowofmosttalentstosuchpositions,thosepositionsthatareimportantforsocialwelfarebutinferiorinpersonalwelfareareleftuninterested.Thisshouldarouseourdeepconcern.　　Formypart,collegestudentsshouldbecautiouswhendecidingwhethertoapplyforthepositions.Ontheonehand,theysh

6、ouldnotfollowothersblindly.Ontheotherhand,thereareplentyofwaysofemploymentandself-employment,sowhycrowdononebus?Inaword,thefevershouldbecooleddown.　　【点评】　　本文属于现象解释型作文。首先通过对当前很多人报考公务员这一现象进行阐释，接着讨论造成这一想像的原因，最后总结全文，表达自己对此的观点。文中精彩词汇包括：applyfor，theeverincreasingnumberof，competefor，arouseourdeepco

7、ncern，cooleddown。其中句式Itisestimatedthat…;以及疑问句的使用Sowhycrowdononebus?也成为文章亮点。例文二　　Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicMediaandShopping.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:　　1.当今，