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1、志愿者工作英语作文各位读友大家好，此文档由网络收集而来，欢迎您下载，谢谢志愿者工作英语作文　　　　作文一：Volunteerworkisnecessary　　　　郭昕硕　　河北省衡水市衡水中学高三3班　　ThereisnodoubtthatvolunteerworkinChinahasbeenbroughtintofocusthroughouttheworld.Wepresentedsomuchlastyear,whichindeedgavetheworldabigsurprise.Ourspirits,ourmeri

2、ts,everythingweshowedduringthegrandgatheringandthedisasterprovedthatvolunteerworkisnecessary.　　AsfarasIamconcerned.Theworkofhelpingotherswithoutpaymentcanbeofgreatbenefitforindividuals.Apartfromtheexperience,theprogresswemakeduringtheprocessisenough.Timepermitti

3、ng,wecantakemoreresponsibilityoutsidetheschoolandgainthepleasure.　　Everyonebuildsoursociety.Withtheeconomicaldevelopment,wearenolongerworryaboutouressentialneedsinourlife.Therefore,tosparemoretimeandtogiveothersahelpinghandcanjustbetherightchoice.Onlybythismeans

4、canwegettoknoweachotherbetterandmakecontributionstooursociety.　　Moreover,itiscertainthattherearestillsomanydevelopingcountriesallovertheworld.FromEthiopiatoDPRK,toomanypeopleareinbadlydemandofhelp.Ourgerosityandwarthmeansalot.Furthermore,organizationofallkindsab

5、outvolunteerworkwillsurelyacceleratetheprocess.　　Takingtheabove-mentionedfactorsintoconsideration.Raisingourowarenessandbehelpfulcandefinitelybesonecessary.Theconnectionbetweenusmustbepermanentwithoureffortsofvolunteerwork.Thereforevolunteerworkisnotonlyapolitic

6、alworld,butalivelyworkrelatedtoyouandme.Soitstandstoreasonthatvolunteerworkisnecessary.　　专家建议：　　建议作者多阅读整篇的英语文章，增强自己的“篇章感”,因为在该篇文章中存在的问题主要是段落见缺乏紧密联系，所以造成各段之间的孤立感的形成，建议作者以后写作时注意段落间的合理过渡。　　专家点评：　　整体结构很好，尤其第一段开门见山的明确了文章的主题，给读者非常好的第一印象。唯一不足的是第三段与上文的衔接很生硬，并且没有段落主题句，会影

7、响文章整体的逻辑感。另外，有个别句子出现表意不明的现象，单词拼写也存在问题，所以希望以后写作时注意细节。　　作文二：Volunteerwork:anuniquelesson　　　　刁文卿　　辽宁省大连市大连市第十二中学高二9班　　Withtherapiddevelopmentoftechndogyandcommunicationinoursociety,thesenseofcompetitivenessandcooperationfilledourmindsteadily.Atthesametime,theowarne

8、ssofhelpingothersinpeople’smindalsobecamestrongerandstronger.Thissituationledtothestartofanew“job”―volunteer.　　Wejustfoundfromthepassagethattheincreasingnumberofthevd