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1、BEC写作语言及组织评分标准：1content2language3structure&vocabulary4organisation展开论述上面的4个方面1内容的完整性2语言6C原则1．准确(correctness)包括四层意义，即阅读人能理解、接受的英语水平；使用精确措词，传达准确信息；正确地使用语法和标点符号；拼写正确。(1)恰当的语言风格请比较下面两组例词：FormalInformalapproximatelyinquireascertainobtainassistparticipateconstructpu

2、rchasecontributesufficientdifficultutilizeAboutAskfindoutreceivehelpsharebuildbuygiveenoughharduse(2)准确的措词和信息(3)正确的语法和标点符号 (4)正确的拼写2．清楚(Clarity)(1)逻辑布局(LogicalOrganization)常用的逻辑布局方法包括：①因果关系(Cause&Effect)②时间顺序(ChronologicalDevelopment)③序列顺序(SequentialDevelopmen

3、t)④比较(Comparison)⑤一般到特殊(FromGeneraltoSpecific)⑥特殊到一般(FromSpecifictoGeneral)(2)合理构架句群与段落(Well-WrittenSentences&Paragraphs)例句：修改前:MarshallCorporationwasfoundedfortyyearsago,anditnowhasbranchofficesinfourstates,anditemploysnearly400individuals.修改后:MarshallCorpora

4、tionwasfoundedfortyyearsago.Withbranchofficesinfourstates,itnowemploysnearly400individuals.(3)统一性与一致性(UnityandCoherence)(4)强调(Emphasis)①位置②重复③数量④技巧(5)将句中关系紧密的词尽量靠近。比较下面三对句子：A.TheyboughtabicycleinBeijinginasmallshopwhichcosts$25.00.Theyboughtabicyclefor$25.00in

5、asmallshopinBeijing.B.Hewaswarnednottodrinkwatereveninarestaurantwhichhadnotbeenboiled.Hewaswarnednottodrinkwaterwhichhadnotbeenboiled.C.Thosewhoworkrapidlygetillintheseconditions.Thosewhoworkintheseconditionsrapidlygetill.(6)避免在同一个句子中使用意义不同的同一个字。Weshalltakeaf

6、irmlinewiththefirm．Weshalltakeastronglinewiththefilm．3．简洁(Conciseness)A.Wehavebeguntoexportourmachinetocountriesabroad.Wehavebeguntoexportourmachines.B.IntheeventthatyouspeaktoMr.Woodinregardtoproduction,askhimtogiveconsiderationtothedeliveryschedule.Ifyouspea

7、ktoMr.Woodaboutproduction,askhimtoconsiderthedeliveryschedule.C.Werequirefurniturewhichisofthenewtype.Werequirenew-typefurniture.使用简洁的语言(Usesimplelanguage)尽量使用避免使用pleasewillyoubegoodenoughtopreferexpressapreferenceforbecauseforthereasonthat4．具体(Concreteness)(1

8、)尽可能地提供明确、具体的信息。A.Thesebrakescanstopacarwithinashortdistance.TheseGoodsonpowerbrakescanstopa2-toncarwithin24feet.B.Wehopetheequipmentwillbedeliveredtoourcompanyassoonaspossible.Ple