2016英语中考满分作文及解析.doc

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1、Iamready Franklyspeaking,I’vedreamedofbeinganexcellentphotographersincemychildhood.Thefeelingofcapturingthebeautifulscenery,thecharmingsmileandtheunforgettablemomentofourlifedefinitelyattractmealot.Therefore,Itriedtogainalotofbasicknowledgeofphotographyandtookpartinthephotographcompeti

2、tioninourschool.Tomysatisfaction,Iwonthefirstprize.Thisyear,Ihaveturned15andIamreadytobeaprofessionalphotographer.WhatIplantodoistoparticipateina‘photographyclub.’Inthisway,Iwillnotonlyacquirefantastictheoriesaboutphotographybutalsolearnagreatmanyvaluableskillsthroughinteractionwithmyf

3、riends.‘EveryeffortImakeisworththepriceanditwillpayoffintheend.’IwillsparenoefforttorealizemydreamandIamdefinitelyreadytoembracemypromisingfuture：tobeanexcellentphotographer.1.Franklyspeaking,I’vedreamedofbeinganexcellentphotographersincemychildhood.Franklyspeaking现在分词作伴随状语，表达自然贴切，inmy

4、childhood表达地道。2.Thefeelingofcapturingthebeautifulscenery,thecharmingsmileandtheunforgettablemomentofourlifedefinitelyattractmealot.三个平行结构结构严谨，表达流畅。3.Thus,Itriedtogainalotofbasicknowledgeofphotographyandtookpartinthephotographcompetitioninourschool.简明扼要阐述自己因为爱好所付出的不懈努力。4.Thisyear,Ihavet

5、urned15andIamreadytobeaprofessionalphotographer.Turn15用法原汁原味，Iamreadytobeaprofessionalphotographer.5.WhatIplantodoistoparticipateina‘photographyclub.’巧妙运用主语从句表达自己对未来的期望与目标。6.Inthisway,Iwillnotonlyacquirefantastictheoriesaboutphotographybutalsolearnagreatmanyvaluableskillsthroughinterac

6、tionwithmyfriends.Notonly…butalso句型很棒，表达自己未来所能取得的巨大进步。7.‘EveryeffortImakeisworththepriceanditwillpayoffintheend.’恰如其分地引用SteveJobs的经典语句，为结尾作铺垫。8.IwillsparenoefforttorealizemydreamandIamdefinitelyreadytoembracemypromisingfuture：tobeanexcellentphotographer.Sparenoefforttodo不遗余力的地做。。。表达高端。

7、总结流畅自然，浑然天成。