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1、假定你是李华，目前在新西兰作交换生。不久前，你在当地一家旅行社（travelagency）预定了“澳大利亚八日游”，但因故不得不取消出游计划。请你给旅行社负责人写一封邮件，内容包括：1.说明情况2.表示歉意.3.询问是否退还定金（deposit）.注意：词数100词左右，可适当增加细节。DearSir/Madam,______________________________yours,LiHua新西兰交换生旅行社预定取消歉意澳大利亚八日游NewZealandanexchangestudenttravelagencybook/reservecancelca

2、ncelledcancellingapologizetosb.forsth.expressone’sapologyfor…atriptoAustraliafor8daysan8-dayAustraliatripHowtoexpressapology1.我写这封信是因取消旅行向你道歉。2.请接受我真诚的道歉。3.对我所做的我感到很抱歉，但我并非故意取消。Iamwritingthislettertoapologizetoyouforcancellingthetrip.Pleaseacceptmyapologyforcancellingthetrip.Iamr

3、eallysorryforwhatIdid,butIhavenointentiontocancelit.Howtoexpressapology4.我真心希望你能理解我的处境(设身处地为我考虑)，并接受我的道歉。5.对造成的不变再次表示歉意。Onceagain,Iamsorryforanyinconveniencecaused.Ireallyhopeyoucanunderstandmysituation/thinkinmyposition,andacceptmyapology.Howtoexpressapology6.错过了这次旅行我感到非常遗憾。7.我真

4、心希望可以再找一个时间参加你们旅行社组织的旅行团。Iamterriblysorryformissingthetrip.IsincerelyhopeIcanfixanothertimeforatriporganizedbyyouragency.DearSirorMadam,IamliHua,anexchangestudentinNewZealand.Lastweek,IbookedaholidaytoAustraliafor8daysinyouragency.ButnowIamsorrytotellyouthatIhavetocancelmybooking

5、.(写作目的)Iwasreallylookingforwardtoenjoyingtheholiday.However,IwasinformedthismorningthatIwouldnotbeabletotakethosedaysoffasplanned.Idoapologizefornotlettingyouknowearlier，whichIhopewillnotcauseyouanyproblems.Besides,IwouldbeverygratefulifyoucouldletmeknowwhetherIcangetmydepositbac

6、katyourearliestconvenience.（歉意和请求）Yourssincerely,TeachingObjectiveThreewritingskills:AttributiveClauseTherebe…Because…Ihopeyoucanhappyeveryday.(婉婷)IamexpectingtotraveltoAustralia,wherehaslovelyKangaroosandbreath-takingscenery.(然)Iamwrittingtoexpressmyregret.(君)Ilookforwardtorecei

7、veyourletter.(信)Andthelastquestionisthatwhetheryoucanreturnmydeposit.（肖）Australiaisabeautifulcitythatpeoplewanttogoandlive.(彦蓉)漏了be动词关系词错误不用双写tto是介词啊！！多了一个引导词还是关系词错误！Ihopeyoucanbehappyeveryday.(婉婷)IamexpectingtotraveltoAustralia,whichhaslovelyKangaroosandbreath-takingscenery.(然)I

8、amwritingtoexpressmyregret.(君)Ilookforwa