英语漫画写作.ppt

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1、2010年开放式作文（生活*社会*......）请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。InyourspokenEnglishclass,yourteachershowsyouthefollowingpicture.Youareaskedtodescribethepictureandexplainhowyouunderstandit.开放作文评分原则:以内容和语言定档定分◆立意明确，逻辑清晰(立意-----细节描述）◆语言达意得分要点：观点鲜明、积极健康、理由充分、思维独特、有创造性写作要领：内容充实、逻辑合理、发散得当、语言

2、正确、句式多样、词汇丰富、行文连贯四、写漫画性开放作文不变的特点人称：图片描述用第三人称；自己观点用第一人称时态：描图用一般现在时；解图一般现在时；议论和联系自己用一般现在时和一般将来时；变化的是：话题2010年北京卷请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于50。InyourspokenEnglishclass,yourteachershowsyouthefollowingpicture.Youareaskedtodescribethepictureandexplainhowyouunderstandit.立意

3、----细节描述立意1：勇于克服困难（小树在不规则大楼中间顽强生长）立意2：成功来自于不懈的努力（小树努力克服各种困难，最终获取了阳光）立意----细节描述把图中的内容描述清楚4-6分过渡句——2分含义——5分1描图句Inthepicture,…Thepictureshowsthat…Ascanbeseenfromthepicture,Aswecanseeinthepicture,FromthepictureIcansee…Asis(vividly)showninthepicture,….怎样用语言描述图片？在描述

4、图片时，推荐以下模式：a.常量主语推进模式例1：Whataninterestingpictureitis!(Whatastrangepictureitis!)Atreeistwistedbytwoclosely-locatedbuildings.Itbendsinthemiddle.Butitstruggles(triesitsbest)allthewaytoreachthesky(theSun).Whataninterestingpictureitis!Atreeisstandingbetweentwoneigh

5、bouringbuildings.Thetreeisnotstraight(outofstraight,bendsinthemiddle),becauseitisaffectedbythebuildings.Butitstruggles(triesitsbest)allthewaytoreachthesky(theSun).b.总说-分说(-总说)推进模式例1：Inthispicture,wecanseetwobuildings,atree,and(thesun).Thetwobuildingsareclosely

6、locatedtoeachother(arecloselystandingoppositetoeachother.).Thetreebendsinthemiddleandsqueezesitswayoutofthebuildingssoastogetmoresunshine.例2：Inthispicture,wecanseetwobuildings,atree,and(thesun).Thetwobuildingsarelocatedoppositetoeachother.Thetreeisstandingbetw

7、eenthetwobuildingsandbendsinthemiddle.Thesunisshiningabovethetree.Thoughtwistedbythesetwobuildings,thetreestillstrugglesallthewayuptotheair.过渡句（描述图片---个人看法）如:Thispicturetellsusthat……Whatimpressesmemostaboutthispictureisthat.......Thispicturemeansthat……Thepict

8、uremakesmethinkof...Thispictureshowsusthat……Thepicturerevealsthefactthat...Thispicturedemonstratesthat…….Thispictureremindsmeof......Thispictureintendstotellusthat……Thesituationino