四级写作之漫画作文辅导.ppt

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1、writingJOANNA写作概述实际样例参考运用（模考分析+下发资料）写作语法黄金结构高分策略之词汇替换高分策略之句型多样化评分标准及建议概述写听读译30mins15%30mins35%40mins35%30mins15%大学英语四级试卷的结构你知道四级的答题顺序吗?作文段落翻译听力长篇阅读仔细阅读在答题纸1上作答,完成后交答题纸1.剩下题目在答卡2上作答.选词填空全国大学英语四级考试答题卡1全国大学英语四级考试答题卡21.审题（1-2mins)2.构思提纲(3-5mins，确定主题)3.写文章(20mins)4.修改检查(5mins)写作概述Stepspre-writing:仔细阅读题干

2、，确定写作主题Para.1:describethepicture简要描述漫画（who,what,when,where…）开门见山TIPS:1.写作的directions部分虽然给出了大致的主题，但是也要求考生对漫画进行描述，切忌抛开漫画内容直接议论！！！（模考作文问题一）TIPS:2.漫画的内容一定要符合图片，切忌无中生有！！！（模考作文问题二）TheboythoughtdeeplyTheboyfeelashemedandsaysnothing.Theboystopsplayingandlearningalot.Theboyismakingaplanandthegrandpaisencour

3、ainghimpara2：全文的核心段giveyouropinionaboutthephenomenonconveyedinthepictureandinterpretitsmeaning/message揭示主题（观点）并加以解释和说明论证;揭示现象(问题)并阐述现象（问题）产生的原因。TIPS：可以从2-3个方面进行阐述，也可以将这部分分为两段。Para3.：giveyourconclusion.(a)提出建议，重申观点主题句(b)对如何解决漫画中所反映的问题提出合理建议或总结观点。TIPS：主题句的复述不是简单地重复，通常需符合如果在段末，用强调词转换方式连接。与主题句保持意思一致，更进

4、一层。转换方式：词对应，同根，逆向EXAMPLES主题句：youshouldconfirmeveryappointmentwhenyoudobusinessinUS.主题句复述：InbusinesscircleinUS,businessmanusuallymakessureeveryappointment.2.主题句：Toperceiveismoreimportantthantojudge.主题句复述句：Itisofgreatimportancetoperceivetojudge.ORToperceiveisnolessimportantthantojudge.实例运用+模考分析模考一一、语

5、法问题1.时态，人称，单复数的混用，不统一。eg:1.Theboyplaycomputergamesandhisgrandpawatchhim.2.Playcomputerisausualactivityforuniversitystudents.3.Lifeplanmusthasadestination4.Ifsomeonedon'thavealifeplan...2.词性的使用错误eg:1.ifyouhaveaplan,youshouldworkhardly.2.sosheissucceedatlast/ayoungpeoplecan'tbesuccess3.weshouldfacedi

6、fficultbravely4.wehavemanychooses3.Therebe句型使用错误eg:1.Therearemanyyoungpeoplewastetimetodosomeboringthings.2.Therehaveaprobleminthefutureifwedon'thavelifeplan.4.被动语态的使用错误eg:1.asshowsinthepicture,theboyis...2.everyonehasalifeplan,maybenotwrite...3.ThefirstConfuciusInstitutebuildin20044.confuciusinsti

7、tutessettospreadchineseculture.4.run-onsentences串句无法理解的句子EG:1.Therearemanythisphenomenons2.ifeverythingisalie,wearen'tneedalifeplan.3.Otherpeoplemakingalifeplanfromsth.4.Asayoungpeople,weshouldhave....二、佳句欣