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1、山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（11）短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。DearMrWang,We’resopleasedthatyouarewillingtosharingyourviews.Int
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3、incaseweforget?Meanwhile,weneedourinstructions,forexample,onhowtowritewithnaturalEnglish.Westillhaveanotherrequest:pleasedon’tmakeusdotoomanyhomework.Bytheway,weoftenfeelworried,whichhasverybadeffectonourstudy.Wewouldappreciateitifyouwouldgiveussomeencouragementfromtimetotime.4用心爱心专心书面表达假设你是李华
4、，你的网友李明来信诉说他英语基础不好，学习很吃力，打算放弃这门学科。请根据以下提示用英语级他回一封e-mail:2.消极对待英语学习不可取；3.如何面对英语学习过程中的困难；4.谈谈你的英语学习方法。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearLiMing,I’velearnedfromyourlastletterthatyouhavedifficultyinlearningEnglishandintendtogiveitup.Ithinkit’sunwisetogiveupthissubject.Otherwise,y
5、oumightbeleftfarbehindbecauseEnglishisnecessaryforusall.Yours,LiHuaDearMrWang,We’resopleasedthatyouarewillingtosharingyourviews.share4用心爱心专心Inthecourseofthegeneralrevision,whatweneededisachainofknowledge.Asyouknow,needwedidn’tlearnwellenoughinthefirsttwoyears,butpleaseslowdownandmakesurewehave
6、sorealmasteredsomething.Besides,weneedalittlemoretimetothinkforus.Asforthosereallyourselvesimportantpointswhichalsomakeusconfusing,wouldyoupleasegiveusmorepracticesincaseconfusedpracticeweforget?Meanwhile,weneedourinstructions,forexample,onhowtowritewithnaturalinEnglish.Westillhaveanotherreque
7、st:pleasedon’tmakeusdotoomanyhomework.muchBytheway,weoftenfeelworried,whichhasvery^badeffectonourstudy.Wewouldaappreciateitifyouwouldgiveussomeencouragementfromtimetotime.4用心爱心专心书面表达：Onepossibleversion:DearLiMing,I’velearnedfromyourlast
