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1、2020冲刺高考英语阅读理解20天集训Day16第二节书面表达假定你是李华,你班外教Ms.King任教期满即将回国。作为班长,你将代表班级在告别会上发言致谢,并赠送纪念品。内容包括:1.感激之情;2.礼物寓意;3.美好祝愿。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Hi,everybody,Onthisspecialoccasion,Ifeelmuchhonored_____________________________________________________________
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3、____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyouverymuch!参考答案【满分作文】Hi,everybody,Onthisspecia
4、loccasion,IfeelmuchhonoredtorepresenttheclasstoexpressoursinceregratitudetoMs.Kingforherexcellentwork.ThankstoMs.King’sgeneroushelpaswellashergreatdevotionandefforts,we’vebecomemoreinterestedanddonebetterinourEnglish,whichwillbeofgreatimportancetoourfurtherstudy.Ms.King,h
5、ere’sapencontainer,asouvenirthatwe’vespeciallypreparedforyou.Hopefullyyou’lllikeit.Thispencontainerismadeofbamboo,whichisevergreenandhollowinsidesothatinChinesecultureit’sasymbolofbeingyoungandmodest.Whatmakesitspecialisthatwe’veallsignedonit,makingitagoodreminderofthehap
6、pytimewespenttogether.Now,I’dalsoliketowishyouapleasantjourneyhomeandalwaysyoungandhappy!Thankyouverymuch!【分析】这是一篇应用文写作。【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,本篇为一封电子邮件;假定你是李华,你班外教Ms.King任教期满即将回国。作为班长,你将代表班级在告别会上发言致谢,并赠送纪念品。内容包括:1.感激之情;2.礼物寓意;3.美好祝愿。第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如:honoredto(荣幸);expressour
7、sinceregratitude(表达诚挚的感谢);generous(大方的);beofgreatimportance(重要的);asymbolof(……的象征)等。第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如ThankstoMs.King’sgeneroushelpaswellashergreatdevotion
8、andefforts,we’vebecomemoreinterestedanddonebetterinourEnglish,whichwillbeofgreatimportancetoourf