托福独立写作机经范文及解析.docx

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1、2015.10.25托福独立写作参考范文10.25号托福独立写作题目是“Peopleinthepastaremorefriendlythanpeopletoday”.考前紧张复习的同学们对这道题目应该不陌生，因它出现在了各大机构的预测题中。我们在课上也有练习过，上过托福强化段的小伙伴们有木有印象呢？但是这个题目因为话题太抽象，在构思和扩展这两个方面都有较大难度。这篇范文从“同意”的角度出发，即现在的人们不如过去友好，采用1+1的篇章结构，从两个方面论证导致人们不友好的原因：现代快节奏的生活以及社会中诚信缺失的现象。两个段落中分别使用了分点讨论、举例等论证方法。希望对大家有帮助。Peoplein

2、thisdayandageoftenfindthemselveslongingfortheharmoniousandsincererelationshipintheancienttimeswhenitwascommonforourancestorstoaccommodateastranger.Suchatimeseemsgoneforeverforithasbeenconsistentlyarguedthatmodernpeoplearemuchlessfriendlythantheircounterpartsinthepast.Personally,Iaminfavorofthisstate

3、mentbecausetherevolutionarychangesinourwayoflivingandourvalueshavereshapedindividual’sattitudetowardsfriendliness.Themodernwayoflivingisdrivingpeopletoanunfriendlysituationfromseveralaspects.Fasttempo,fiercecompetitionandtheresultingoverwhelmingpressurefromworkareexhaustingthewhitecollars,especially

4、thelong-distancecommuterswhomighthavetospendhoursonpublictransportduringrushhours.Thus,itisfairlyunderstandablewhenatiredyoungmandidnotofferhisseattoanelderlywomanonthebus,whichiscommonlyconsideredasanunfriendlybehavior.Moreover,afterarrivingattherentedhouseinatallbuilding,peopletendtolockthemselves

5、inandspendtimealone,suchaswatchingmovies,readingandsleeping,ratherthanchatwithneighbors.Chancesarehighthattheneighborsmightnotknowabouteachother,letalonebefriendly.Itturnsouttobeviciouscircle.Thiscaseisinsharpcontrastwiththesituationinthepast,whenpeoplelivingintheneighborhoodwerelikeabigfamilyandwer

6、ealwaystheretocareandhelpothers.Therefore,itisnotexaggeratedtosaypeoplebeingunfriendlycanbeattributedtothemodernlivingstyle.Inthisdishonesty-prevailingsociety,manypeoplechoosetobeunfriendlytoprotectthemselves.Itisnotunusualtoseefromoursurroundingsthatmanybeggarsaredisguisedasdisabledorinamiserablesi

7、tuationinordertocheatthekindcitizensformoney.Whatismore,newsreportsoftenhavethatthosewhokindlyhelptheoldpersonlyingonthestreetarenotrewarded,butaredeliberatelyblamedbythefamilyoftheoldastheonecausingt