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1、---Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.---建议信写作导学案一、实例分析(2010深圳五校联考基础写作)在紧张的高三备考阶段,各校为了确保教学质量,除了早读和晚自习以外,每天至少要上9节课,甚至周末都要上课,学生们有大量的作业要完成,感到非常疲倦。为此,校学生会根据学生的实际情况,给校长写了封信,表达你们的需求和建议。a)适当减少课时,留出思考时间b)反复训练重要、易错知识点,培养能力c)减少作业量以保证质量d)少些批评,多些鼓励注意:短文开头已给出(不算入要求的5句话里)。DearPrincipal,Wearewri
2、tingtosayoutwhatwearethinkingaboutthepreparationfortheentranceexaminationinseniorthree.1)Inordertoguaranteetheteachingqualityinthecourseofthegeneralrevision,weseniorthreestudentsatleasthave9periodseachdayapartfrommorningandeveningclasses.2)Besides,wehavegotalotofhomeworktodo,
3、whichmakesusexhausted.3)Accordingtotherealsituationofusstudents,wethinkthatitisnecessarytoreducetheamountofperiodsandleaveustimetothinkbyourselves.4)Meanwhile,giveusmorepracticeonthoseimportantandconfusingpointstocultivateourabilitytodealwithproblems.5)Furthermore,reducedaily
4、homeworktoassurethequalityandgiveuslesscriticismbutmoreencouragement,whichwethinkwillbebeneficialtousall.Wedohopethatyoucantakeouropinionsintoconsideration.Thanks.YoursStudents’Union二、讨论:1.建议信的内容安排第1,2句__________________第3,4,5句__________________2.时态__________________3.人称_____
5、_____________4.语言特征__________________三、技巧点拨1.概念:建议信是向收信人对某事提出写信人的建议和忠告。2.分类:1)写给个人,就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点;2)写给某个组织和机构,就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。3.内容安排:1)写出写信的原因、背景;2)建议的内容及提出建议的理由4.语言特征:1)建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。2)提出的理由要入情入理,语气一定要礼貌当先。5.注意事项语言要委婉、礼貌,顾及对方感受。四、常用写作句型1.表对对方的情况表示理解,并乐意帮忙:•Iti
6、sapitythat…4---Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.---•I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto…•I’mverygladto…andgiveyousomesuggestionsonhowto…•Itismypleasuretodo…I’mwillingtogiveahandtoyou.2.提建议的句式•Youcando…•Itisuseful/helpful/important/necessary…foryoutodo…•Inmyopinion
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8、pinion,…写作模板一DearBob,I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonho