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1、【网络综合-初中2011英语作文评语】MynameisJinJiahong,andmyEnglishnameisKaci.I’m14yearsold,37kg.IlikeEnglish,andbooks,red,orange,pink,blue,shuttlecock,waternmelon,apple,andbananas.Yesterday,IwenttoZhejiangUniversitytolearnEnglish.Oh,hereisbeautiful!Imakeafriend.HernameisMayun.SheisfromHangzho
2、u,she’s10yearsold,andlikesapples.Today,I’mveryhappy.班主任评语：Verygood!Keepstudyinghard,andIbelieveyoucanlearnalothere!Mychinesenameis范依昀。MyEnglishnameisKate.Brown.MyfamilynameisBrown.MyfirstnameisKate.I’m12yearsold.Iamchinese.I’mfromHuzhou.Ihavemanyhobbies.Ilikeplayingfootball,an
3、dplayingcomputer.Ilikebluebest.Ihaveafriend.Hernameis蒋姣姣。Shelookshappy,sheislovely.Ilikeherverymuch.ShelikeswatchingTVandsinging.thereisthreepeopleinmyfamily,myfather,motherandme.Myfatherisadoctor,mymotherisadoctortoo.Ilikethemverymuch.Iamhappyeveryday.Mytelephonenumberis*****
4、***.Welcometomyhome.班主任评语：verygood!Yourhand-writhingisverynice.Todayisthefirstdayofthesummercamp.Icouldn’tsleepwellyesterdayevening.MaybeIfeltalittleuncomfortable.Iseldomlivewithothers.Andthebedroomisdifferentformhome.ButImetthreenewfriendshere.They’refriendlyandlovely.Afterth
5、ebeginningceremony,Ihadanexam.thefirstpassagewasalittledifficultforme.SomewordsIhaven’tlearnbefore.Ispentsomeminutesonit.Anyway,IthoughtIpassedit.Intheafternoon,Isawtheforeignteacher.HernameisJane.AbeautifulfirlwhocomesfromUSA.Sheisnotold,just22.ButshehadbeentoEurope,Beijing.S
6、heletusplaysomegames,becauseshewantedustoknoweachtherquickly.ButIthinkthegamesisnotinteresting.Sosomestudentsdon’tputtheirheartsinthegame.AlsotheteacherspokesoquicklythatIcouldn’tunderstandher.班主任评语：Beautifulhand-writing!Exceptforsomegrammermistakes,thisdairycouldbeperfect!Asf
7、ortheclass,Ithinkyouwillfeelbetterandadapttotheclassdaybyday
