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1、满分作文的3大技巧按要求升级下面的考生作文(2017·全国卷Ⅲ)假定你是李华。你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友Eric写封邮件邀请他加入,内容包括:1.球队活动;2.报名方式及截止日期。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。考生习作DearEric,I’mwritingtoinviteyoutojoinourschoolteam.①Studentshavetoldmethatourschoolteamisrecruitingnewmembers.②Iknowthatyoulikeplayingtabletennis,soIwanttoknowwhe
2、theryouwouldliketojoinit.③Teammembersnotonlygettrainedafterschooleveryday,butareoftenofferedchancestowatchtabletenniscompetitions.④Thathasdonegoodtome.Ifyouareinterestedinit,youcanvisittheschoolwebsitetosignupbeforetheclosingdate,June15.I’msureitwillbeagreatchoiceifyoujointheschoolteam.Yourssincere
3、ly,LiHua我来提升作文升级第一步 让词汇高级亮丽利用高级词汇升级文中加黑体词汇1.told→__informed__2.like→__bekeenon__3.wanttoknow→__wonder__4.chances→__opportunity__5.dogoodto→__benefit/beofbenefitto/bebeneficialto__6.sure→__convinced__作文升级第二步 让句式丰富多变按要求升级句式并将黑体词语替换为升级后的词汇1.利用被动句改写句①__Ihavebeeninformedthatourschoolteamisrecruitingnewm
4、embers.__2.利用分词作状语升级句②__Knowingthatyouarekeenonplayingtabletennis,Iwonderwhetheryouwouldliketojoinit.__3.利用倒装句升级句③__Notonlyteammembersgettrainedafterschooleveryday,butareoftenofferedopportunitiestowatchtabletenniscompetitions.__4.利用非限制性定句从句合并句升级为倒装句后的句③和句④__Notonlyteammembersdogettrainedafterschool
5、everyday,__butareoftenofferedopportunitiestowatchtabletenniscompetitions,whichhasbenefitedmemost.__誊写升级后的作文__DearEric,I’mwritingtoinviteyoutojoinourschoolteam.Ihavebeentoldthatourschoolteamisrecruitingnewmembers.__Knowingthatyouarekeenonplayingtabletennis,Iwonderwhetheryouwouldliketojoinit.Notonlyt
6、eammembersdogettrainedafterschooleverydaybutarealsooftenofferedopportunitiestowatchtabletenniscompetitions,whichhasbenefitedmemost.Ifyouareinterestedinit,youcanvisittheschoolwebsitetosignupbeforethedeadline,June15.I’mconvinceditwillbeagreatchoiceifyoujointheschoolteam.____Yourssincerely,____LiHua__
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