郊区suburbs情景作文假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华.ppt

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1、2009年高考情景作文假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为响应绿化祖国的号召，你班四月十二日去郊区植树，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍植树活动的全过程，给某英文杂志的“绿色行动”专栏写一篇以“GreenActioninOurClass”为题的英文稿件。注意：词数不少于60提示词：郊区suburbs情景作文假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为响应绿化祖国的号召，你班四月十二日去郊区植树，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍植树活动的全过程，给某英文杂志的“绿色行动”专栏写一篇以“GreenActioninOurClass”为题

2、的英文稿件。注意：词数不少于60提示词：郊区suburbs审中文信息标题图的顺序不能错！词数提示词第一人称过去时图1.出发图2.种树过程图3.安插提示牌图4.照相留念审图四幅图的先后顺序：图1内容要点及细节要点出发细节清晨骑车出发风景和心情图2内容要点及细节要点种树细节挖坑搬树种树浇水图3内容要点及细节要点安插提示牌细节安插提示牌爱护树木图4内容要点及细节要点照相留念细节手里拿着种树工具站在小树林和牌子旁心情或感受图1内容要点及细节要点Setout细节EarlyinthemorningonApril12th；suburbs;

3、bybike；图2内容要点及细节要点planttrees细节arrive;digholes;carrytrees;watertrees;图3内容要点及细节要点putupaboard细节putupaboardsaying”pleaseprotecttrees”图4内容要点及细节要点takephotos细节takephotos;standinarawwithtoolsinhands;besidetheboardandtrees顺序要点要点的细节支撑连接词Picture1setoutearlyinthemorning;onApril

4、12th；suburbs;bybike；earlyinthemorningPicture2planttreesarrive;digholes;carrytrees;watertrees;assoonaswearrivedattheplantingspot;whenwereached…；uponarrivalPicture3putupaboardputupaboardsaying”pleaseprotecttrees”afterwards;afterfinishingplantingallthetrees;Picture4tak

5、ephotostakephotos;standinarawwithtoolsinhands;besidetheboardandtreesbeforeleaving;inordertotreasuretheactivity阅卷过程中发现的问题时间和地点不清：onApril12th,suburbs关键词错误：dig-dug，board字数不足60词-1无结尾-1人称错-酌情扣分时态错-降档情景作文写作要求内容要点、上下文的连贯、词汇和句式的多样性及语言的准确性。考试说明指出：情景作文评分原则先看内容定档重点参考语言质量注重整体语言

6、运用能力要点齐全，语言好，进三档以上（12分以上）缺要点，语言差，四档或五档（11分以下）情景作文各档范文高考范文：April12ismemorablebecauseourclasshadameaningfulexperienceonthatday.Inthemorning,webicycledtothesuburbstoplanttrees,talkingandlaughingalltheway.Uponarrival,webegantoworkimmediately.Somewerediggingholes.Somewer

7、ecarryingandplantingyoungtrees.Otherswerewateringthem.Aftergettingtheworkdone,weputupaboardremindingpeopletoprotectthetrees.定档：一档Beforeleavingwetooksomephotostorecordourgreenaction.Seeingthelinesoftrees,weallhadasenseofachievement.Wefeelit’sourdutytoprotectandbeauti

8、fyourenvironment.点评GreenActioninOurClassIamLiHuafromClass1Senior3inHongXingmiddleschool.OnApril12thourclassorganizedanactivitytoplanttrees