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1、如何写好英语作文Task1分析材料组织结构1998年洪灾(events)----para1洪灾原因(reasons)----para2解决方法(solutions/measures)----para3Task2语言运用描述:happened/worst/causedgreatlosses/damaged/washedaway/gotdrowned/swallowed/victims/homeless;原因:keptraining/deforestation/cutdownillegally/topsoil/washedaway/turnedinto/b
2、locked;措施:takemeasuresto/protect/treesalongtherivers/rebuild/dams/turnbackintoTask3过度词选择(joiingwords)1.引导从句的连词:which,that,when,as,where,what,how,whatever,who,whoeveretc.过度连词:and,but,yet,while,as,assoonas,generallyspeaking,inmyopinionbesides,except,inspiteof,despite,however,inawor
3、d,,ontheothersideetc.插入语:bytheway,thatistosay,tomakethingsbetter/worseetc.Task4Writing:1998floodsInthesummerof1998,disastingfloodshappenedinChina,whichweretheworstonesinthiscentury,causinggreatlosses.Fieldsweredrowned;housesweredamaged;manyvictimswereswallowedinthemandalargenumbe
4、rofpeoplebecamehomeless.Afterwards,thescientificanylysisshowedthereasonsforthefloodsliedinthreemainfactsdonebymenthemselves.First,ithadkeptrainingformonths.Second,manytreeswerecutdownillegallyandthetopsoilwaswashedaway.Finally,somelakeshadbeenturnedintofieldsandthewaterwaysgotblo
5、ckedseriously.Thereforeit’surgenttotakesomemeasurestoproventfloodsfromhappeningagain.Forexample,thetreesalongtheriversshouldbewellprotected;olddamsshouldberebuiltandfieldsbeturnedbackintolakes.Task5check检查找出明显的时态和语态的错误;找出拼写错误;找出明显的语法错误;找出语病也就是有否中式英语;CheckThefloodshappenedin1998w
6、astheworstoneduringthecentury.Ourcountrywasattacked.Thisfloodshapppenedbecausethelongtimeraining,whichlastedseveralmonths.Butthisisnotthemainreason,whichthethingswhatpeoplehaddone.LotsofpeoplecutdownthetreesnertheYellowRiverandtheyturnthelakesintolandtoplantmorethingswhattheyneed
7、.fromthiscase,wemustlearnaboutwhatwedonedoharmtotheenviaonment.Fromnowon,wemustprotectthetreesneartheriverandburiedmorebanks.Wemuststartnow.