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1、开放作文:思路:1.描图:2.解图3.析图4.圆图常用句试:开头:1)FromthepictureIcansee…2)Aswecanseeinthepicture,aboyisdoing…,whilethemanisdoing…3)Ascanbeseeninthepicture,agirl…4)Inthepicturewecanseesomebodyisdoing…5)Thisisasimplebutmeaningfulpicture.2.解图1)Thepicturewantstotellusthat…2)Thepicturereflectsacommonphenomenono
2、foursociety.…3)Thepictureshowsthesocialproblemvividly.4)Thispictureattemptstoconveythemessagethateveryone,asamemberofsociety,shoulddo…3.析图Doingthatcanleadto…whiledoingthatcan….Ifwedon’tdoitinthisway,theresultis….Soweshould…..4.圆图Onlyinthisway,canwerealizeourdream….Weshoulddo…likethatwayinthe
3、picture.Weshouldn’tdo…likethewayinthepicture.开放作文请根据下面提示,写一篇短文,词数不少于50。InyourspokenEnglishclass,yourteachershowsyouthefollowingpicture.Youareaskedtodescribethepictureandexplainhowyouunderstandit.写作思路1、图画中的要素是什么?(人、桌子、面条、叉子)2、要素之间有何关系?(他在做什么)3、如何理解这幅图?(把两只叉子当筷子用;模仿)4、从中得到什么观点?(选择正确工具和方法;不能盲目模
4、仿)篇章结构:描图----解图----议图----圆图开放作文评分参考扣题充实活跃清晰规范附件Ascanbeseeninthepicture,aboywantstoeatnoodleswithtwoforks,it’sveryhardtodothatandtheboyisveryworried.Thepictureisverysimpleandmeaningful.Inmyopinion,wemustchoosethebestwaytodothings.Somepeopleinourdailylifearelikeboyinthepicture.Hecaneatthenoodl
5、eseasilywithonefork,buthedoesn’tdothat.Italsowastetimeandenergy.So,findabestwaytosolvetheproblemisoneofthewaytosuccess.点评:描图较好;议论部分能够结合图画,观点虽然简单,但是表述清楚易懂。9分附件Onepossibleversion:Whataninterestingpicture!AWesternyoungman,sittingatatable,isreadytoeatabowlofnoodles.Heisholdingtwoforksthesamewaya
6、sweChineseholdchopsticks.Heistryingsohardtopickupthenoodlesthatheissweatingalot.Atfirstglance,Ithinkit'sabitfunny,forweChinesetakeforgrantedthatchopsticksarethetoolsforeatingnoodles.Themaninthepictureistryingtocopyus.Obviouslyheisdoingitthehardway.Maybeusingoneforkwilldoabetterjob.Inmyopinio
7、n,wedon'tneedtocopyother'swaysofthinking.Sometimesasimplerwayofdoingthingsmaybeabetterway.附件Asisshowninthepicture,aforeignboyisdoinghisbesttoeatnoodles.Butwithtwoforksinhishand,itisimpossibleforhimtogetthenoodlesintohismouth.Ithinkthepicturetriesto