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1、必修2Units3～5话题之四——家庭生活三年3考[2011陕西]假定你是中学生李华。在一位名叫TigerMom的学生家长的博客上，你看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求，给这位家长回复。I’mthemotherofafourteen-year-old.Ihavearuleformydaughter:beamongthetop5studentsorgetpunishedinonewayoranother.Shehasbeendoingverywellinschool,butsomefriendsofminekeep
2、tellingmethatIputtoomuchpressureonher.AmIwrong?写作要点：1.表明自己的看法；2.陈述自己的理由（可举例说明）；3.提出至少两条建议。要求：短文词数不少于100。Hi,TigerMom,WhatpuzzlesyouisactuallyapuzzleformanyparentsinChina.Myideaisthatitisnotquiterightforyoutodoso.Althoughhighgradesareanimportantfactorinevaluatingstud
3、entsandfortheirfutureuniversityadmission,developmentinwisdom,emotion,health,andlifeattitudeshouldneverbeignored.Therearemanyexamplesaroundus.Someall-Astudentsinschoolhaveturnedoutnottobeassuccessfulinsocietyastheywereexpected.Thereasonisoftenthatthepressurefromthei
4、rparentsallowsthemalmostnotimeforotheractivities.Furthermore,punishmentisbynomeansawisechoicetohelpthemgrowupmentallyandphysically.SoIsuggestthatyoutakeyourfriends’advice.Moreimportantly,letherlivelikealovelygirl;letherhavemorefriendsandsocialactivities;andletherma
5、kemistakesofherownasweteenagersoftendo.1.本文以博客回复的形式来写，反映了命题的鲜明时代性。另外，全文结构清晰，要点齐全,切合试题要求。①第一段首先表明自己的态度，承接家长博客话题引出本文。②第二段说明原因，结合实例，可信度强。③第三段提出自己的建议，然后用三个并列句表达，说服力强。2.全文行文流畅，使用词汇恰当。①高级词汇和短语：evaluate,ignore,turnout,bynomeans,mentallyandphysically,makemistakes②高级句型：What
6、puzzlesyou...,Myideaisthat...,...astheywereexpected,Thereasonisoftenthat...③语篇过渡语：although,furthermore,so,moreimportantly【佳作习得】完成句子Chineseplayerswon5goldmedalsinVancouverWinterOlympicGames,＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿(正如我们先前预料到的).aswehadexpectedbefore书面表达的评分标准是把衔接与过渡作为重要标准来要求的。学生要
7、学会恰当地使用这些表示逻辑关系的关联词语，使文章前后连贯、结构紧凑、过渡自然。基础指导（四）——衔接过渡一、使用过渡性词语1.表递进关系的过渡词:besides,inaddition,moreover,what’smore，what’sworse等。2.表转折对比的过渡词：but,however,yet,instead,ontheotherhand,onthecontrary,despite,inspiteof,whereas,nevertheless等。3.表结果的过渡词:so,thus,therefore,asaresu
8、lt,sothat等。4.表换一种方式表达的过渡词:inotherwords,thatistosay,toputitanotherway等。5.表达普遍规律:generallyspeaking，ingeneral，allinall等。6.表总结的过渡词:inaword,ingeneral,
