W2-3(饼状图作业分析).ppt

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1、IELTSPreparationCourseWritingmoduleREVIEWFORTIME1.消磨时间2.诱人的3.上瘾的4.自控5.逃课6.辍学7.学习表现8.不成熟的9.沉迷于10.占用11.生产力12.效率13.制止LINECHART饼状图描写饼状图只需要记住以下三点：总体与部分的关系部分与部分的关系比较多饼之间（多饼图）ASSIGNMENTYoushouldspendabout20minutesonthistask.ThegraphbelowshowthechangesinthemaritalstatusofCanadiansaged15andoverin19

2、01and1996.Writareportforauniversitylecturerdescribingtheinformationonthegraph.Youshouldwriteatleast150words.PROBLEM1Tense时态1901或者1996年统计的数据用什么时态？Badexample:“Accordingthepiechart,marriedwhichis52.1%isthemostpopularamongthemaritalstatusin1901.”PROBLEM2Subject主语到底谁是主语？Married,Divorced等等是adj.可

3、以做主语么？BADEXAMPLE“Accordingthepiechart,marriedwhichis52.1%isthemostpopularamongthemaritalstatusin1901.”改：Accordingtothepiechart,themarriedCanadians,whichaccountedfor52.1%,occupiedthemostproportionamongallkindsofmaritalstatusin1901.PROBLEM3VocabularyVariety能否不只用accountfor表达饼状图占据比例的所有说法？BADEX

4、AMPLE“In1901and1996,marriedCanadiansaccountedformorethan50%.In1901,singleCanadiansaccountedfor41%anddivorcedpeopleaccountedfor0.5%.Butin1996,separatedpeopleandcommon-lawpeopleaccountedfor2.6%and8%respectively.”可替代词：RepresentMakeupOccupyConstitute…PROBLEM4多图题请指出是从那副图得到的以下信息如：二饼题。可用theleftch

5、art和therightchart表明是描写哪副图的具体情况Badexample:“Accordingtothepiechart,marriedwhichwas52.1%.”两张图，这样的写法并不明显PROBLEM5在IELTSWriting中不要使用缩写Badexample:“It’sdividedintofourtypesasfollows:…”一定要写成：Itwasdividedintofourtypesasfollows:…”PROBLEM6切记不要主观，尽量避免I，we这样的提法。Badexample:“Nowfromthetwographs，wecanclear

6、lyknowthat…”改成：“Nowfromtheabovetwographs,itcanbeclearlyshownthat…”PROBLEM7两饼之间对比不够，基本没有写出变化和倍数关系。Goodexamplefrom贾宇光“Itshouldbenotedthatthefigureofdivorcedpeoplein1996wasover100timesasmuchasthatin1901.”PROBLEM8Wordcount依然有人的作文绝对不超过120字，我确信。延展思路，增加部分之间的比较和多图之间变化的说明，字数能明显扩充。THISISTHEEND.Thank

7、youforyourattention.