书面表达 高三英语评析及指导课件.ppt

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1、高三英语评析及指导课件一．优秀（26—29）要点全面紧扣主题，观点表达充分，能有效使用连接成分，具备较强的书面表达能力。语言小错，不超过四个，不能有一处大错。二．良好（22---25）要点全面紧扣主题，观点表达较充分，语言有少量错误（大错不超过三个），但基本不影响意思表达。三．一般（18—21）要点全面，紧扣主题。语言表达基本充分，语言错误影响部分意思的表达，但多数句子基本正确。小错：单词拼写,冠词,大小写，标点符号错误。大错:句法结构错误；内容要点或次要点遗漏;搭配错误;词语用错（介词，名词，动词,

2、副词，形容词，主谓一致，非谓语动词);汉语式英语.只要出现了一个大错，就与优秀档即26-29分彻底无缘了。Studentssleeplessthan7hours.Becausetheyareburdenedwithlotsofhomework.Studentssleeplessthan7hours,becausetheyareburdenedwithlotsofhomework.一、Sentenceswithoutsubjects二、Onlyclausesarepresented80%ofthestu

3、dentsthinkshouldbegivenlesshomework.80%ofthestudentsthinktheyshouldbegivenlesshomework.1.Moststudentsburdenedwithtoomuchhomework.Moststudentsareburdenedwithtoomuchhomework.2.Payingtoomuchattentiontostudents’gradeswillofgreatharmtotheirhealth.Payingtoomu

4、chattentiontostudents’gradeswillbeofgreatharmtotheirhealth.3.Somestudentsagainsttheidea.Somestudentsareagainsttheidea.三、SentenceswithoutverbsStudentsshouldbenotgiventoomuchhomework.Studentsshouldnotbegiventoomuchhomework.四、VerbswiththewrongobjectsWecan’

5、teattoomuchsugarandfat.Wecan’teattoomuchfoodwithmuchsugarandfat.Wecan’teattoomuchfoodrichinsugarandfat.Wecan’teattoomuchfoodwhichisrichinsugarandfat.Wecan’teattoomuchfoodcontaininglotsofsugarandfat.Weshouldavoideatingtoomuchfoodwhichcontainsmuchsugarand

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7、rs.…,andwecanbuysomenewtreesandflowerswiththerestofthemoney”六、Rightuseatoneplacebutwronguseatanother1.Dormitoriesareplaceswhichstudentscanrestandrelaxthemselves.Dormitoriesareplaceswherestudentscanrestandrelaxthemselves.2.Dormitoriesareplaceswherestuden

8、tscanrestandrelaxthemselvesin.Dormitoriesareplaceswhichstudentscanrestandrelaxthemselvesin.七、MisuseofconnectionsintheAttributiveClauseRecentlywehavehadadiscussionaboutwhetherstudentsstudyinginuniversitiesshouldgetapart-timejob.Op