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1、WritingtypesAboutapersonAboutaneventAboutaplanforaholidayorvacationAboutadreamforthefutureAboutopinionsandsuggestionsLearninggoalsMastersomeskillsofEnglishwriting;Bethankfultothepeoplearoundus.Topicwriting---aboutapersonQiangNainingLearninggoals1.Learnhowtowriteacompositiona
2、boutaperson;2.Learnsomeskillsofimprovingacomposition.Howtimeflies!Iwillgraduatefromjuniorhighschoolinabout90days.ButIwillstillrememberaperson---myteacher.Letmetellyousomethingabouther.SheismyEnglishteacher.HernameisLucy.Sheisabout30yearsold.Sheisofmediumheight.Shehaslonghair
3、.Shewearsglasses.Sheisfriendly.WhenIhavesomequestionsinEnglish,shehelpsmewithmyEnglish.NowmyEnglishisgood.IlikemyEnglishteacher.学生范文:Myteacher1、主次不分:过渡侧重基本信息的描写,没有侧重个性品质的描写。2、词汇、句型单调3、逻辑性差4、缺乏真情实感Howtowriteacompositionaboutaperson?Step1decidewhoyouwanttowriteStep2fromwhatasp
4、ects(方面)Step3decideperson(人称)andtense(时态)Step4expressyourthanksorlovetohim/herStep5makeadraft(打草稿)I.BeginningThreeparagraphsII.Mainpart(主体部分)III.Ending思考:每段侧重点?(开门见山)(详细介绍)(以情收尾)Para1:comestraighttothetopic(开门见山)I.BeginningHowtimeflies!IthasbeenthreeyearssinceIgotintothissch
5、ool.Now,it’stimetosaygoodbyetomyteachers.ButIespeciallywanttosaythankyoutomyEnglishteacher.说明写作对象Para2:introducethepersonAge(年龄)Appearance(外貌)Hobbies(爱好)Personality(个性品质)II.Mainpart(主体部分)Personalityactivecarefulconfidentcreativeseriousenergetichard-workinghumorousknowledgeab
6、letalkative不被常用的好词:warm-heartedgood-lookingSheisofmediumheightwithlongstraighthair.WhenIfirstmether,Ithoughtshewastooserious.Astimegoesby,Ifindthatsheisactuallyveryfriendlyandwarm-hearted.Sheisthemostcarefulteacherwhohasdeeplyinfluencedmeinmymiddleschoollife.WhenIhadproblems
7、,shewasalwaysgladtohelpmeout.WhenIfeltupset,shetriedtocheermeup.WhenIwastootiredtostudy,sheencouragedmetokeeponworkinghard.Personality(个性品质)(用实例说明)用排比句增强气势巧用定语从句Para3:bringoutthetheme(点题)andexpressyourfeelings(表达感情)III.EndingThankstoherhelp,Ihavegrownupalotduringthepastthree
8、years.What’smore,Iambraveenoughtofaceallthedifficulties.IhopeIcangetgoodgra
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