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1、【雅思写作】解析剑7写作范文 来源：留留学论坛 收藏5Itisgenerallybelievedthatsomepeoplearebornwithcertaintalents,forinstanceforsportormusic,andothersarenot.However,itissometimesclaimedthatanychildcanbetaughtto becomeagoodsportspersonormusician.Discussboththeseviewsandgiveyourownopinion.×观点比较选择类
2、的题目，题干中有两个观点：观点一：先天具备观点二：后天养成比较两个观点并且给出自己的看法，则应该给出两个观点的合理之处，比较之后在进行自己的选择表态。Thismodelhasbeenpreparedbyanexaminerasanexampleofaverygoodanswer.However,pleasenotethatthisisjustoneexampleoutofmanypossibleapproaches.Therelativeimportanceofnaturaltalentandtrainingisafrequentto
3、picofdiscussionwhenpeopletrytoexplaindifferentlevelsofabilityin,forexample,sport,artormusic.（开头段落描述题干所讨论问题的普遍性。开头句式简短，不冗赘，一个复合句搞定。插入语的使用避免了题干的机械性重复，同时保证了句子的连续性）Obviously,educationsystemsarebasedonthebeliefthatallchildrencaneffectivelybetaughttoacquiredifferentskills,inc
4、ludingthoseassociated withsport,artormusic.（－ly副词开头主题段落一肯定第一个观点，表示作者本身的态度）（从句和被动语态的使用）Sofromourownschoolexperience,wecanfindplentyofevidencetosupporttheviewthatachildcanacquiretheseskillswithcontinuedteachingandguidedpractice.（模糊例证，支持上一句中的观点。从句的使用。连接词so的使用）However,somep
5、eoplebelievethatinnatetalentiswhatdifferentiatesapersonwhohasbeentrainedtoplayasportoraninstrument,fromthosewho becomegoodplayers.（转折词however,承接上文，引出第二个观点的支持论证）（词汇方面，innate,differentiate）（语法方面，完整复合句的使用）Inotherwords,thereismoretotheskillthanalearnedtechnique,andthisextra
6、talentcannotbetaught,nomatterhowgoodtheteacherorhowfrequentlyachildpractices.（对于观点二的支持解释）（连词inotherwords的使用）Ipersonallythinkthatsomepeopledohavetalentsthatareprobablyinheritedviatheirgenes.（表达自己对观点一的部分支持）（词汇方面，inherit）Suchtalentscangiveindividualsafacilityforcertainskil
7、lsthatallowthemtoexcel,whilemorehard-workingstudentsnevermanagetoreachacomparablelevel.（解释论证，比较反差）（词汇方面，excel,comparablelevel）（结构方面，连接词such的使用）But,aswithallquestionsofnatureversusnurture,theyarenotmutuallyexclusive.（转折词but引出作者的观点：兼收并取）（词汇方面，natureversusnurture,mutuallye
8、xclusive）Goodmusiciansorartistsandexceptionalsportsstarshaveprobablysucceededbecauseofbothgoodtrainingandnatur
