大学英语四级测试作文评分标准.ppt

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1、大学英语四级测试作文评分标准2分：条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。5分：基本切题，表达思想不够清楚，连贯性差，有较多的严重语言错误。8分：基本切题，表达思想比较清楚，文章尚连贯，但语言错误较多，其中有少量的严重错误。大学英语四级测试作文评分标准11分：切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14分：切题，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本上无语言错误。字数不够扣分。（各段已给出的主题句均不得计入）段落不够扣分。评分样卷(1)WomenintheModernWorldWomenareplayinganinc

2、reasinglyimportantpartinsocietytoday.Intoday,manywomenhaveawork.Theyworkedaswellasmenplayinganimportantpartinfactories.Therearemanywomeningoveneralso.Theyleadotherpeoplecomtral,andmakeoutplans.Therearemanywomenscientistalso.Theyeventnewthingstoimproveourlife.评分样卷(1)Withthechangesin

3、theirsocialrole,women’spositioninthefamilyhasbeenimprovedaswell.Inancient,women’spositioninfamilyispity.Theyhadtolooksaftertheirchildren,dideveryhowhusbandorderedhertodo.Butnowitischanged.Theyareequaltoherhusband.Theyhavetherightofspeakingofidea,discussionthingswithherhusband,dowha

4、tshewantstodo.评分样卷(1)Inspiteofthesechanges,theliberationofwomanhasnotbeencompletelyrealized.Wealsoshouldrealize,women’slikertyarelimited.Forexample,manyfactorieswantmenbecomeitsworkersbutthechanceofwomenislessthanmen.Everyoneshoulddotheirbesttochangethiscondition.I’msure,theliberat

5、ionofwomenwouldbeincreased.5分基本切题，表达不够清楚，连贯性差，有较多严重错误。评分样卷（2）Womenareplayinganincreasingimportantpartinsocietytoday.Moreandmorewomengotoworktoearnmoneyinsteadofkeepingthehouseorlookingafterthechildren.Womenhaveenteredmanyfieldsofsocietyincludingscientificfield.Asweknow,manywomenspo

6、rtsteamshavewontheworld’schampionsuchasChineseWomen’sVolleyballTeam.评分样卷（2）Withthechangesintheirsocialrole,woman’spositioninthefamilyhasbeenimprovedaswell.Husbandsarenotthemastersofwivesinmanyplaces.Husbandsandwifeareequalnow.Theyjointogethertoovercomedifficultiesandsharehappiness.

7、评分样卷（2）Inspiteofthesechanges,theliberationofwomenhasnotbeencompletelyrealized.Alsoinsomeplaces,womenareconsideredbeing“things”belongtomen.Theyhavelittlechancetofindjobs.Theydon’tgetequalpayforequaljob.Thisisaproblemmustbesolvednotonlybysocietybutalsobywomenthemselves.11分切题，思想表达清楚，连

8、贯。有个别句子结构错误及少量其他语言方面的错误评分样