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1、新技能：如何大刀阔斧地将一篇1200字的SOP初稿改到600字，完整而有细节地回答申请学校提出的问题。案例：张同学，国内Top20大学英语系，申请JohnHopkins&TsinghuaUniversity国际关系双硕士项目。SOP要求：Discussyourgoalsforgraduatestudyandforyourprofessionalcareer.Whatexperienceshavemostcontributedtoyourdesiretostudyinternationalrelations?HowwillJohnsHopk

2、insSAISandyourintendedconcentrationservetomeetyouracademicandprofessionalgoals?IfyouhaveselectedInternationalDevelopmentasyourfirstchoiceconcentration,itisimportanttoalsoaddressyourinterestsinyoursecondchoiceconcentrationasyourapplicationmaybereviewedbybothprograms.Ifyoui

3、ntendtopursueadualdegreeyoushouldaddressthisinterestaswell.Thisessayshouldbenomorethan600wordsinlength.审题：JHUSAIS国际关系项目的SOP严格要求600字以内就需要回答完整：读研目标、职业规划、学术动机和学校、专业匹配度四个方面的内容。针对这样的题目要求，SOP的基调应该是就事论事、言简意赅、主次分明。开头（修改前）：Upongraduatingfromhighschool,IchosetostudyEnglishinXiamenU

4、niversitybecauseIdevelopedaninterestinEnglishliteratureduringhighschoolyears.Throughoutthepastthreeyears,notonlydidItakecorecoursesonEnglishlanguageandliterature,butalsotookavarietyofcoursesonliberalarts.Throughhardworking,Iranked1/107amongmyfellowstudentsinmydepartmentwi

5、thaGPAof3.86/4.开头较为平淡，只说明除英语文学外还修习过其他人文类课程，但没有开篇点出本科学英语专业和研究生申请国际关系之间的关系。开头（修改后）：Aftergraduatingfromhighschool,IchosetomajorinEnglishatXiamenUniversity,withthepassiontomoredeeplyunderstandtheworldthroughthelensofdifferentlanguages.Throughoutmyundergraduateyears,IstudiedEn

6、glishlanguageandliteratureandalsodelvedintotheliberalartswhereIdevelopedintellectualcapabilitiesfromdifferentperspectives,includinghistory,journalism,andenvironmentalsociology.Imaintainanexcellentacademicperformanceandrank1/107intheEnglishdepartmentwithaGPAof3.86/4.字数要求较少

7、的SOP，如果想表达清楚题目要求的各项内容，开头便需要直截了当、切入主题。修改后的开头段，第一句就说明掌握多国语言对认识世界的重要性，并具体指出自己修过其他人文社科学科的课程，以深化对世界的理解。第二段（修改前）：EnglishopensupawindowthroughwhichIcantakeaglimpseofalargerworld.Overthepastthreeyears,Idevelopedastronginterestininternationalrelations.Therefore,whenI1""gotadmitted

8、totheexchangeprogramintheCityUniversityofHongKong,IwasdeterminedtoselectInternationalPoliticalEc