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1、读后续写微技能
2、氛围营造法之二
3、3大高潮营造法1Whatisaclimaxofastory?(什么是故事高潮?)文学故事中的高潮(climax)----故事的主要场景(keyscene)也通常是故事的转折点(turningpoint),是指故事达到最紧张或扣人心弦的那一部分。高潮有时候是剧情中的"危机"点。有时候,它只是达到关键时刻或者转折点,发生了一些事情,或者主角必须做出决定,从而导致一个结果或其他。我们在分析叙事类故事或者小说故事的时候常常用下面的图表来表示故事情节。常见故事高潮示例:1.Alittlegirlhasbeensearchingforherlostdog.Allo
4、fasudden,shehearsabarkcomingfromaroundthecorner,andshelooksaroundtosee...2.Kevinhasworkedveryhardtotryoutforthesoccerteamatschool.Thecoachhaspostedalistofthisyear'steammembersonhisofficedoor.Kevinwalksforwardtolookatthelist....3.Mary'sparentshavebeendiscussingwhetherornottomovetoanotherstate.Th
5、eycallMaryandhersisterdowntotalkwiththemabouttheirdecision...4.Loishasperformedinthestategymnasticsfinals.Shewaitsanxiouslytohearthenamesofthewinners.Theannouncersays,"Andfirstplacegoesto..."文学名著中的一些故事高潮1.ThedeathsofRomeo(whokillshimselfbecausehethinksJulietisdead)andJuliet(whokillsherselfwhens
6、heawakesandseesRomeodead).RomeoandJuliet,Shakespeare(罗密欧和朱丽叶,莎士比亚)2.WhenGastonandthetownspeoplecometoattackthebeast,andBelleadmitsherloveforthebeast.BeautyandtheBeast,Disney(美女与野兽,迪士尼)3.In"TheThreeLittlePigs,"suspensebuildsupuntiltheconfrontationbetweenthethirdpigandthewolf.Thisconfrontationist
7、heclimax.(三只小猪)2Howtocreateaclimaxofastory? (如何营造故事的高潮?)方法1.增加外部冲突增加外部冲突是一种明显有效的可以达到故事高潮的方式。冲突带来紧迫感, 将故事推向必要的解决或崩溃。1)角色之间的冲突 (人物观点差异, 竞争需要等)如:2017年11月浙江英语高考:Onthefourthorfifthnight,wehad trouble findingahotelwithavacancy.Afterdrivinginvainforsometime,Momsuddenlygotagreatidea:Whydidn'twefindahou
8、sewithalikely-lookingbackyardandaskifwecouldsetuptentthere?DavidandIbecamenervous. 开车找旅馆---徒劳无功---母亲建议搭帐篷在他人后院---David和我倍感紧张,心有不悦(母子的观点不一)2) 角色与环境之间的冲突如:2017年6月浙江英语高考: ThenMacheardquickandloudbreathingbehindhim.……hesawinstantlythatitwasn'tadogatall,buta wolf:quicklycatchingupwithhim.Mac'sheart
9、jumped.……,hefiredthesprayatthewolf.Abrightredcloudenvelopedtheanimal,andtoMac'srelief,itfellback,shakingitshead.Butaminutelater,…….Thenit……,tearingopenhistentbag.Hefiredatthewolfasecondtime,andagain,itfellback……Mac骑车独自行,路遇饿狼,与之搏斗,