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1、BEC作文范文及写作点评Yourdepartmentneedstorecruitmorestaff.Yourlinemanagerwantsyoutowriteareportexplainingyourrequirementsandcommentingonrecruitmentmethods.Lookattheinformationbelow,onwhichyouhavealreadymadesomehandwrittennotes.Then,usingallyourhandwrittennotes,writeyourreport.Write120-140words.作文范文:R
2、eportonstaffrecruitmentAsourcompanyisdevelopingseveralnewproducts,thedepartmentofR&Dneedsnewstaffurgentlytohelpdesignandmonitorourproducts.Thusweneedtorecruit35newstaff,includingelectricalengineersandproductdevelopers.Allofthemshouldhaveatleasttwoyears'experienceinrelevantfield.Morespecificre
3、quirementswillfinallybedecidedinafewdays.Astorecruitmentmethods,thedisadvantageofrelyingonrecruitmentagencyisthatweneedmoretimeandprocedurethanwecanafford.SoIsuggestweturntoamoredirectwayofNewspaperadvertisement,whichhasbeenusedmanytimesandprovedeffective.Comparingthetwonewspaper,EchoandChron
4、icle,weprefertheformerbecausethoughitcharges£500morethanthelatter,thegeneralreadersare400,000more,mostofwhomarehighly-educated.Wearesuretogetreplysoonafterwelaunchtherecruitmentcampaign.考生作文一:Asthenewprojectwillbesetoffthisyear,ourdepartmentneedstorecruit35newemplyees[1].Thenewstaffs[2]shallh
5、aveabilityincludinginnovation,teamwork,hard-working,goomanner.[3]Thereexiststhreewaystorecruitnewstaffs[2]:Newspaper(Echo)advertisments,Recurimetagency,Onlinerecuriment.Allofthemhaveitsadvantagesanddisadvantages,soweshalluseallofthemtoassurehigh-qualifiedstaffscanseetheinformation.[4]FortheRe
6、curimentagency,theefficiencyislowbutitprobablycanoffergood[5]qulifiedpeople.WHyichoseechoinsteadofChronicasithasmuchmorereaderswithonlyfivehundreddollorshigher._________________________________________[1]拼写是BEC作文中很重要的给分原则。[2]基本词汇不过关,staff是集合名词,不用复数[3]这看起来是招聘广告上的东西吧,很抽象。审题要看懂要求,whattypeofstaff
7、是指要招聘什么部门的员工。[4]废话一句,可以去掉。题目要求是写出recruitmentagency的缺点,当然任何一种招聘方式都各有优缺,所以直接写disadvantage。[5]去掉,形容词怎么能修饰形容词考生作文二:DearPaddy,[1]Nowourcompanyhasalreadyputintoarightpath.Ithink[2]weshouldbuildan[3]completeorganizationinordertoleadourcompanytoobtai